Bonjour mademoiselle!
Pardon, je te reponds en anglais, parce que mon clavier japonais ici au boulot ne me permet pas d'ecrire avec des accents... 
I'm sorry, I translated the whole thing myself again directly from the French, because I prefer doing that to correcting another translator's version, if possible.
First, I feel confident the first line has to be
De tes amants bien revenu
e
(as you know, the pronunciation is the same) because the
next line talks about “you†too, i.e.
Dans tes beaux habits neufs
So I'll translate it accordingly.
Here is my translation, for your consideration:
---(start)---
You came back from your lovers after all
In your nice new clothes
You should at least anyway
See the entrance or otherwise
Without a doubt you haven't understood anything
Even though you destroyed everything anyway
In the northern pavilion
That you were afraid of
The great exit available
That you had refused me
We were just about to say this to each other (We went along telling this to each other?)
That we weren't comfortable there (That we weren't quite there yet?)
And to go completely to the end/bottom
And to come back again
Without ever going further than
The door and the hall
Of the building of this place
Its exterior appearance
When you were complaining you were less scary
As if you were erasing all my errors
And I really imagined
It was just on the brink (That nothing was important?)
We could have faced
what we had seen
---(end)---
As you can see, some lines were ambiguous, and I don't know why
And to go completely to the end/bottom
suddenly changed to the indicative present, from the past...
Poems are hard...
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