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14 augustus 2008 07:19  

serba
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I waited for you - they weren't coming at all

hep seni bekledim bir türlü gelmeyen

kafetzou burada niçin "they " kullandın.

hep seni bekledim ve sen bir türlü gelmedin

aslında cümle bu.
 

14 augustus 2008 07:43  

kafetzou
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I took it as a continuation:

hep seni bekledim bir türlü gelmeyen
Delikanlı yüreklerin çılgın vuruşlarında
 

15 augustus 2008 08:13  

serba
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couldn't it be "you" instead of "they"

devamı olarak da düşünsen orada they yok yoksa ben mi göremiyorum.

gelmeyen kiÅŸi hayali bir sevgili ya da beklediÄŸi belli bir kiÅŸi
 

21 augustus 2008 07:15  

serba
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hep seni bekledim bir türlü gelmeyen = hep seni bekledim "SEN" bir türlü gelmedin


where is "they" here??
 

21 augustus 2008 19:31  

buketnur
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Merhaba Kafetzou,
"İlkyaz" "bahar" anlamına gelir.
 

22 augustus 2008 07:49  

kafetzou
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Her zaman öyle mi buketnur? "İlk yaz" anlamına gelemez mi?

CC: buketnur
 

23 augustus 2008 17:52  

kafetzou
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Lilian, Tantine, or Ian, can you do an evaluation of this one?

CC: lilian canale Tantine IanMegill2
 

23 augustus 2008 17:55  

lilian canale
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Hi Kafetzou,

If all those comments were in English evaluating would be a bit easier...
 

23 augustus 2008 18:10  

kafetzou
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Good point.

Serba was worried about my translation of the title, which I had taken to be connected to the rest, but he pointed out that it might not be. I didn't change anything there.

Buketnur pointed out that "ilkyaz", which literally means "first summer", actually means "spring". I asked if it could mean "first summer" metaphorically, as in "first time someone experienced love", but she said it couldn't, so I changed it.
 

23 augustus 2008 18:11  

kafetzou
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Actually, I just noticed serba's last note, and I'm going to change the title accordingly - there was a form I had misunderstood there.
 

23 augustus 2008 18:11  

kfeto
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i interpreted the first line like serba too
last line something like: from what the springs could take of your free beauty
 

23 augustus 2008 18:14  

kafetzou
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Apparently "alabildiÄŸine" is an adverb that means "totally" - I didn't know it either.
 

23 augustus 2008 18:16  

kfeto
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ha ok, thanks kafetzou
 

23 augustus 2008 21:19  

merdogan
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to be "delikanlı" is not only for men . "youngster" can be better instate of "young men's hearts".
and
"ilk yazlar" means here "the first love"
 

23 augustus 2008 22:48  

merdogan
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the meaning is not O.K
 

26 augustus 2008 07:59  

serba
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by the way using "first summer" instead of "spring" for the word "ilk yaz" would be more poetic.
 

26 augustus 2008 08:02  

serba
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bence ilk yaz first summer olarak kalmalı.

ilk yaz=ilkbahar=first summer= spring

ancak ilk yaz ve first summer kelimeleri şiir için daha uygun bence..
 

27 augustus 2008 06:18  

kafetzou
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OK - I changed "Springs" back to "first summers", and changed my translation of "delikanli" to "hot-blooded youths".
 

27 augustus 2008 15:54  

lilian canale
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Everyone happy now?

May I validate it?
 

27 augustus 2008 17:06  

kafetzou
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merdogan and serba, is it OK now?

CC: merdogan serba
 
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