Tercüme - Everything passes with time (İngilizce)

Could the people who voted against this one either say why they did (in English) or change their votes?

CC: Mordicchio Freya goncin saunders Xini

I voted wrong for the same reasons told by freya in her last message.

How can I be shaking with your eyes? Do you think Tantine's solution (the way the translation stands now) is incorrect?

CC: Freya

i think each line has nothing to do with the rest, as the space between them and the very rude comment say (Be fast...They're Italian quotations).

I think they are from different songs.

Oh! That changes everything. I will edit it and validate it.