ترجمة - Jag (سويدي)

Isn´t it possible to say something like this in Swedish:

"Jeg vil tage afsted sammen med dig" (in Danish)

Or - more in tune with the original Italian sentence construction: "Sammen med dig tager jeg afsted"

I tried to edit; but I can't find the right verb...If some poll results will be negative, I'll reject it and let someoe better than me translate!

'Jag ska resa samman med dig' sounds like a bit old expression..maybe just:
Jag kommer resa med dig.

Pias:
I´m obviously not the Swedish expert here, I´m just wondering if "resa" doesn´t mean "to travel"?
Doesn´t Swedish have a word for "to leave"/"depart"/"go away"?

" Jag ska resa samman med dig" is more like "I will make a journey together with you" or "I´m going to travel with you" . " I will leave with you" is a bit strange, since the word "leave" means "lämna" I´m not sure but I think that "con te partiro" means "when you leave" Maggis

Jag ska resa tillsammans med dig hade varit bättre

Hi Anita,
I'm neither an expert, but...
resa=trip,journey, and also leave
reser=travel,go away,travel abroad ...

I think that Caroline's proposal is a god one!

Xini, 'sticka' is another verb for resa..
It's a more everyday expression.

Thanks for the explanation, pias!!

Thank you all for your special help.
That's how I learn

And I'm happy it wasn't wrong, just sounded "old"

Hope now it's better, I'll reset the poll

Greetings.

'Jag ska sticka tillsammans med dig' is fine!!...but to say it in a more concise way.
Maybe just:
Jag kommer sticka med dig.

is ATT omitted in this case?
Just in writing or in spoken too?

I think you could use ATT, but it's not necessary. I think that people when talking forget to say that ATT-word...but, in writing
maybe it's more correct as you suggested.

(I wish there was a swedish expert here who realy know)

Ok, since it's a song (-->poetry-like) I would use the written form.
You are my Swe expert pro-tempore.

so at the end, the final version isn't that fare from mine:

Jag kommer att resa med dig

Jag kommer att sticka med dig

Thanks

You should be aware that the word "sticka" (and therefore your swedish expression) is BY FAR NOT neutral, which I percieve the english translation to be (I do not understand the original language, unfortuanately). I would propose the following translation: Jag går härifrån tillsammans med dig

Now I'm interrupting again
There is a point in what you are saying Piagabriella, It should be neutral, but..in the daily life I think (?) sticka is a neutral word(sticka och jobba, sticka och handla, sticka iväg på semester etc, etc) but maybe 'sticka' is to much a everyday expression, hm
your suggest 'Jag går härifrån tillsammans med dig' is good
or
Jag ska ge mig av tillsammans med dig. !?

There is nothing in the original text that has an attitude, but the swedish translation does. Not everyone would use "sticka", which is a slang word.

Ok for me. But do you know that this is also a title for a song? It is translated into finnish by a name: this night....(Lucio Quarantotto, lyrics F. Sartori) I should think that the song is translated and recorded in swedish too, maybe it will be found from the net...