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| 16 October 2009 13:14 |
Leinจำนวนข้อความ: 3389 | Hi Merdogan
The meaning seems fine to me. Just a couple of things:
- in the summer vacation
- the summer vacation is a defined period (pretty much) so I think it would be better to say 'I have been to the country'. What do you reckon? |
| 16 October 2009 16:13 |
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| 16 October 2009 16:45 |
| "Then I went out WALKING with some friends. |
| 16 October 2009 17:08 |
piasจำนวนข้อความ: 8113 | |
| 16 October 2009 19:20 |
| Who is Lene?
and
Where is " some" ? |
| 16 October 2009 19:53 |
piasจำนวนข้อความ: 8113 | Lene = gamine
I agree with her about "walking". |
| 16 October 2009 20:36 |
| spazieren gehen = to go for a walk |
| 17 October 2009 07:21 |
| Then I went out FOR A WALK with my friends. |
| 17 October 2009 15:34 |
| Well, I think that "I went out walking" or "I went for a walk" signifies exactly the same thing. , but Merdogan is right. There is no "some" . "I went out walking/I went for a walk with MY friends.
CC: maglat |
| 18 October 2009 02:20 |
| oh, sorry gamine, didn't notice your post which corrected the same thing. i apologize, just saw the original translation and thought no one noticed the "walking" part, but now i see you did. i meant exactly the same thing basically ) |
| 18 October 2009 13:54 |
| I think it is almost correct, however I'd rephrase the first sentence... I have been to the country during the summer vacation. |
| 19 October 2009 00:23 |
| Hello maglat. Don't worry. No problem. It oftens happens to me to. Welcome to our . |
| 19 October 2009 08:01 |
| for "during" there is nothing in original text. |
| 19 October 2009 08:33 |
aabcจำนวนข้อความ: 21 | I think it has to end with: Then i went for a walk with my friends. |
| 19 October 2009 12:15 |
Leinจำนวนข้อความ: 3389 | Do you agree with the 'walking' thing, Merdogan?
How would you prefer the last sentence? I will then edit and validate. |
| 19 October 2009 14:43 |
| I WENT TO the country FOR summer vacation.
spazieren — to stroll
I went to the country for summer vacation. There, I went to a cafe. Then, I went out for a stroll with my freinds.
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| 19 October 2009 17:45 |
| I think the German text has still some mistakes: "auf dem Lande sein" --> "auf dem Lande gewesen"; "habe spazieren gegangen" --> "bin spazieren gegangen"; I would surely add "walking" in the last sentence. |
| 21 October 2009 08:14 |
| I would make it. Then I went out for a walk with my friends. |
| 21 October 2009 09:20 |
| Dear Friends,
I took it as " Ich bin.......gewesen"
It is not "to go" . It is "to be" |
| 21 October 2009 12:36 |
Leinจำนวนข้อความ: 3389 | Hi Merdogan, from all the comments I would suggest
I have been to the country in the summer vacation. There, I went to a cafe. Then I went for a walk with my friends.
Do you agree? Can I edit and accept?
Thanks! |