Translation - My heart is a crazy admiral (English)

I agree with Tantine's version
It's much better that way

to take a walk não me parece correcto para "a passear"

Nem a mim... parece estranho dizer isto, mas... parece que está demasiado dentro do contexto...

Por isso mesmo "wandering, wandering" ficaria muito melhor.

My heart is a crazy admiral
Who gave up his life at sea
and remembers it
little by little
wandering, wandering
at home.

[9] At cucumis we love translating poetry but we cannot promise to make it rhyme... and catch the very sense of it.

I like your last version.

"...we cannot promise to make it rhyme" hahahaha

ne e tochen prevodat

Zornitsa, could you speak english or maybe portuguese for us to understand you? Thanks

I like lilian canales version!

Lilians

Lilian's version.

"life" conveys much sooooo much more

I will edit, then validate

Bises/beijos
Tantine

Hi Lilian (in particular, anyone else in general)

I have edited this text using your (Lilian's) translation so, technically, Lilian should earn the points for this translation.

I will donate you the equivalent if you want

I'll validate now

Bises
Beijos
Tantine

Hi Tantine:

I'm glad my version was so well accepted, but...
if the points are to be donated, I think that in order to be fair, they should be divided among the many who gave suggestions, including yourself, so don't worry...thanks anyway.

Bises
Lilly.

I agree!

Lilian's verson
or
Tantine's version