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2008年 十一月 5日 21:15 |
| Hi, turkishmiss. I think there is a problem in the last sentence. You can try this one if you like:
"The love should belong to someone who deserves it" |
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2008年 十一月 6日 08:28 |
| 4üncü cümle bence yanlış,
Love must belong to the one who deserves (merits) it. |
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2008年 十一月 7日 23:51 |
| yalnızca son satır yanlış geldi bana. Onu da şöyle çevirdim ben: the love must exist in whom deserves...
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2008年 十一月 8日 22:48 |
|  Hi Miss,
Would you like to make any change in your text? |
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2008年 十一月 9日 00:54 |
| Yes Lilian, Figen sent me an explanation and now I can edit. Thank you.
Here it goes:
I want you to understand what is the meaning ,first:
'Aşk layık olanda kalmalı'= with other words: 'aşkın kıymetini kim biliyorsa, aşk onda/o kişide kalmalı.'
here goes:
'the love, must remain/stay in (one) who deserves (it).'
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2008年 十一月 9日 00:57 |
| Well I think it would sound better as:
"love must come to the one who deserves it"
Is that right? |
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2008年 十一月 9日 01:00 |
| This translation is needs work. Among other things, we really don't say "according to me" in a context like this in English. We say "I think". |
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2008年 十一月 9日 01:01 |
| "Love should be for those who are ready for it." |
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2008年 十一月 10日 16:04 |
| Hi Lilian, should I edit with
In your opinion, love is made up of words
In my opinion, it's the meaning of life CC: lilian canale |
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2008年 十一月 10日 16:14 |
| Hi Miss,
Actually, Kafetzou's version is quite different.
"Love must come to the one who deserves it" and "Love should be for those who are ready for it" have different meanings I guess. Which is the right one in the original?
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2008年 十一月 10日 16:29 |
| I edited my version according to a bridge from Figen.
layık olanda is the verb Layik olmak.
"to be ready" for is hazir olmak
May be we should ask for other experts opinion. |
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2008年 十一月 10日 16:24 |
| hi turkishmiss
I think
"according to me" is a formal expression for this text.(kafetzou also talked about it)
"I think ", "for you" or "to you" can be better choices...
good luck |
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2008年 十一月 10日 17:27 |
| IMO, it would sound better as:
"You think (believe)..."
I think..."
I'll ask for a little help, OK?
Hey guys, could you tell us exactly what the last line means?
CC: serba kfeto |
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2008年 十一月 10日 20:58 |
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2008年 十一月 11日 03:59 |
| how about
to you..
to me...
Love must stay/remain with the one worthy of it |
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2008年 十一月 11日 23:38 |
| Ä° think it's:'love should stay next to someone who deserves it'. Ä° have another question, whose song is it? Ä°lhan ÅžeÅŸen's or Kayahan's? |
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2008年 十一月 11日 23:47 |
| Hi 44Hazal44,
could you have a look to message above. first it was translated as :
"the love, must stay in who deserves it".
And Lilian our expert said it would be better as :
"love must come to the one who deserves it"
I'm sure Lilian is right
CC: 44hazal44 |
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2008年 十一月 12日 00:03 |
| Yes, finally, Lilian is right, 'come to' is better and 'the one' is also better than 'someone' because it indicates that it's one person.. i don't know how to explain that but it's like this in Turkish.. |
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2008年 十一月 12日 00:59 |
| The reason why I said "Love should be for those who are ready for it," is that we sometimes say the expression "to be ready for love" in English with the meaning of being open to receive it, I thought that was what was meant here, but I see now that I was wrong. Here is what I would write, in somewhat smoother English:
You think that love is only words
But I think it's the meaning of life
Keep going along in your way
Love should be for those who are worthy of it. |
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2008年 十一月 13日 15:04 |
| I think they also use "to me" to say I think
To you, love is made up of words
To me, ..... |
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