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Dịch - Croatian-English - Nocima ne spavam gledam u mrak Svjetlosti trazim...

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Nocima ne spavam gledam u mrak Svjetlosti trazim...
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Submitted by casper tavernello
Source language: Croatian

Nocima ne spavam gledam u mrak
Svjetlosti trazim i najmanji trag
Djevojka kraj mene kao da nije tu
Neosecam nista bas nista za nju.
Razmisljam o svemu o sebi i njoj
O carstvu samoce u ljubavi toj
Sadasnjosti proslost vode nas ka dnu
Buducnost se gubi u nejasnom snu.

Carstvo samoce izmedu nas
Prazna tisina dosade znak
Zar cigarete tezak je zrak
Glumim joj ljubav trazeci spas.

Izlazimo rijetko jer nevoli to
a svade sve cesce nam donose zlo
U drustvu je hladna i odbojna sva
Ogovara svakog to sve je sto zna
O njoj se necuje povoljan sud
Nikom nije draga ta njezina cud
Nema poverenja u meni za nju
Buducnost nas ceka u srusenom snu.
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Title
I haven't slept for nights, I look at the dark ...
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Translated by maki_sindja
Target language: English

I haven't slept for nights, I look at the dark
I look for the smallest trace of light
The girl beside me as if she isn't there
I don't feel anything, just anything for her.
I think about everything, about myself and her
About empire of loneliness in that love
The present and the past lead us to the bottom
The future is lost in an unclear dream.

Empire of loneliness between us
Empty silence is a sign of boredom
The smoke of the cigarette makes breathing hard
I pretend loving her seeking salvation.

We rarely go out because she doesn't like that
and the arguments bring us evil more and more often
She is cold and all dislikable in the company
All she does is backbiting everyone
There is no good judgment about her to hear
Her temper isn't dear to anyone
There is no trust in me for her
The future is waiting for us in a destroyed dream.
Validated by lilian canale - 9 Tháng 1 2009 00:45





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6 Tháng 1 2009 11:17

lilian canale
Tổng số bài gửi: 14972
Hi Maki, this is very good. I'd just like to make clear some lines.

"A smoke of cigarette is a difficult air
I perform her love while seeking salvation."

Could you explain those lines in different words?

argues ---> arguments
we go out rarely ---> we rarely go out

She backbites everyone ??

6 Tháng 1 2009 21:20

maki_sindja
Tổng số bài gửi: 1206
Hi Lilian,

"A smoke of cigarette is a difficult air" means it isn't easy to breath the smoke of cigarette.
And "I perform her love while seeking salvation" means he is acting as if he loves her (he isn't sure anymore if he does love her) and in that way he is trying to find salvation; he thinks that is solution of their problems...

"She backbites everyone" means she speaks evil against everyone.

I hope I made it clear now.
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6 Tháng 1 2009 22:23

lilian canale
Tổng số bài gửi: 14972
Here are my suggestions:

A smoke of cigarette is a difficult air ----> The smoke of the cigarette makes breathing hard

I perform her love while seeking salvation----> I pretend loving her seeking salvation

She backbites everyone, that's all she knows
----> All she does is backbiting everyone

6 Tháng 1 2009 22:44

maki_sindja
Tổng số bài gửi: 1206
Thank you Lilian VERY MUCH!

6 Tháng 1 2009 22:47

lilian canale
Tổng số bài gửi: 14972
To the poll, then!