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Dịch - Swedish-Latinh - Jag älskar dig, vi för evigt

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This translation request is "Meaning only".
Title
Jag älskar dig, vi för evigt
Text
Submitted by tassen
Source language: Swedish

Jag älskar dig, vi för evigt

Title
TE AMO,
Dịch
Latinh

Translated by Porfyhr
Target language: Latinh

TE AMO, NOS IN ÆTERNUM
Remarks about the translation
I would have preferred conuingit, but æternum and perpetuum seem to be the two Latin "pop"words. I do hope the vocabulary was more extended at the old days.
3rd person is natural if I talk about a he and she. Like a coin and a bill. Is that strange.
I still wish to know Xini. Is my first translation wrong?
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Validated by Porfyhr - 19 Tháng 9 2007 18:06





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19 Tháng 9 2007 07:52

Xini
Tổng số bài gửi: 1655
1) Why all caps, Porfy?
2) Can you explain för evigt -> coniungit?

19 Tháng 9 2007 08:25

tassen
Tổng số bài gửi: 3
"För evigt" means forever...

19 Tháng 9 2007 09:20

Porfyhr
Tổng số bài gửi: 793
1) I recently read an interesting essay according to the proper writing of Latin.
2)
coniung.it V 3 1 PRES ACTIVE IND 3 S
conjungo, conjungere, conjunxi, conjunctus V (3rd) TRANS [XXXAO]
connect, join/yoke together; marry; connect/compound (words) (w/conjunctions);
unite (sexually); place/bring side-by-side; juxtapose; share; add; associate;

Marriage is meant to last eternally. What would you have suggested instead?

Do you have any complaints?

19 Tháng 9 2007 09:25

Porfyhr
Tổng số bài gửi: 793
Tassen:

Do you say that you would have preferred another translation. Why not do it yourself?

"Æternam" is often wrongly used, if you are not intending to become a dried flower.

CC: tassen Francky5591

19 Tháng 9 2007 16:58

Xini
Tổng số bài gửi: 1655
"in aeternum" is more literal.

By the way, why use 3rd person?
1) That implies the existence of a third subject.
2) That implies an action which is not intended in the original.
3) The action implies that they've been "united" in a certain moment in time, while "in aeternum" can mean that they've been always united, poetically even before they were born.
4) By the way, marriage is not mentioned here.

That's why I think it's wrong.

By the way, when I translate into Italian or Latin, since there are other experts, I rarely evaluate my own translation (i do it just if they're literal and very simple) or at least I ask for a poll before accepting, so if someone has something to say he can say it before it is accepted.

About allcaps, I would not use them since, in my humble opinion, it's not proper now and here. They're too "connotated" now, since we use allcaps to shout, to say "warning" etc... I think the best is, if you want, to put the allcaps version in notes, saying that "This was the proper Latin writing since they didn't use smallcaps". I think that now, writing in allcaps, you slightly change the perception of the message.

What do you think?

19 Tháng 9 2007 12:38

tassen
Tổng số bài gửi: 3
I have´nt said anything about anything! I just wanted help with translating... and one of you wanted to know what "för evigt" ment... so I explained that... I can translate it to english, but I want to know it in latin and italian!

19 Tháng 9 2007 13:50

Xini
Tổng số bài gửi: 1655
Ok tassen, we were talking about how to best translate your request.

19 Tháng 9 2007 15:53

pirulito
Tổng số bài gửi: 1180
Xini is right!

In aeternum = för evigt

My suggestion is to keep a litteral translation (for example, Te amo, nos in aeternum) rather than a controversial interpretation. What do you think?



19 Tháng 9 2007 16:21

tassen
Tổng số bài gửi: 3
Sorry... missunderstanding... thought you talked to me when you started the sentence with Tassen. Thank you for helping me!!!

19 Tháng 9 2007 18:29

Xini
Tổng số bài gửi: 1655
Yes Tassen:

Porfyhr was talking to you, but I was talking to Porfyhr.

20 Tháng 9 2007 08:03

Xini
Tổng số bài gửi: 1655
Porfyhr, you wrote:

I would have preferred conuingit, but æternum and perpetuum seem to be the two Latin "pop"words. I do hope the vocabulary was more extended at the old days.
3rd person is natural if I talk about a he and she. Like a coin and a bill. Is that strange.
I still wish to know Xini. Is my first translation wrong?


Well, I really don't understand of what "he" or "she" would you have talked about. No 3rd person is mentioned in the original text, only the 1st singular and plural. And yes, I still think your first translation was wrong, sorry to say this to a collegue like you but that's my opinion.