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Pragnienie
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Tillagd av Aneta B.
Källspråk: Polska

Pragnienie

Pragnienie by zatrzymać czas
Pragnienie by móc się śmiać
Pragnienie by żyć w zgodzie z Bogiem
Pragnienie by zrozumieć siebie
Pragnienie by trwał wiecznie dotyk
Pragnienie by połączyć się głęboko
I to pragnienie by umrzeć razem
I trwać ze sobą na wieki wieków. Amen.
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Titel
Desire
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Engelska

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Språket som det ska översättas till: Engelska

Desire

Desire to stop time
Desire to be able to laugh
Desire to be at peace with God
Desire to understand myself
Desire to have a touch last forever
Desire to get deeply connected
And the desire to die together
And to stay with each other for ever and ever. Amen.
Senast granskad eller redigerad av lilian canale - 3 December 2009 15:11





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7 November 2009 00:01

Aneta B.
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It looks so similar to the original in its style.. I really expect the alliteration...

But I have some little remarks:

Pragnienie by zrozumieć siebie
--> "Desire to understand each other", but I meant there rather:
"Desire to understand myself" (I know Polish word "siebie" is ambiguos and it really wasn't so obvious and you could think sth else).

I trwać ze sobą na wieki wieków. Amen
-->"And take us with you for ever and ever. Amen."
Hm, I'm wondering if we can change so much the sentence... Litterally it means:
"and last together for ever and ever. Amen"


Anyway, thank you for the translation, Alexander!

8 November 2009 16:50

lilian canale
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I think you did it again Aneta...
Is tanty's name "Alexander"?

8 November 2009 17:06

Aneta B.
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It's hard to keep up with the translators, Lilly!
I apologize, tanty...
Thank you for a translation!

8 November 2009 17:12

Aneta B.
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But, do you know Polish, tanty. You have not got it in your preferences...

"Desire to last forever touch" ?

Is it correct?
I would say rather:

"Desire the touch would last"...

But I can be wrong, of course.

24 November 2009 23:25

AleksanderS
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Here's my version:

Desire

Desire to stop the time
Desire to be able to laugh
Desire to be at peace with God
Desire to understand myself
Desire to have a touch last for ever
Desire to get deeply connected
And the desire to die together
And to stay with each other for ages of ages. Amen.

24 November 2009 23:42

Aneta B.
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It is perfect now according to me, Alexander!
Thank you!

17 December 2009 10:24

Francky5591
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If I'm not mistaking about this text, there is not one single conjugated verb in it, is it? (only infinitives)

So in a way, it is breaking our rule 4

I'm not intending to remove it, just posting a remark.

17 December 2009 15:25

gamine
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You are right, Franck. Didn't notice when I translated it.

CC: Francky5591

17 December 2009 18:13

Aneta B.
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Ooops! I didn't notice when I submitted the text! I'm sorry.

We can always adapt it to our rules addding a verb to it. I propose to put into the first line:

Polish: "Jest pragnienie by zatrzymać czas"

English: "There is a desire to stop time"

What do you think, Francky?

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17 December 2009 18:28

Francky5591
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Hi!

No, we won't change it, as sometimes there are some possible exceptions to this rule, and IMO it is one of them.

This is why I said "in a way"


17 December 2009 18:31

Aneta B.
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So, thank you!
Yes, poems shouldn't be changed. Copyright! Hehehe!

22 Oktober 2012 02:14

Lev van Pelt
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@Francky et al.:

There are in fact two conjugated verbs here, at least in the English translation (one subjunctive ("last" ) and one participle ("connected" ))



22 Oktober 2012 18:55

Aneta B.
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I'm sorry, I don't get your point, dear Lev. What do you mean? I still can't see any CONJUGATED verb in my poem nor in its English version.

1 November 2012 21:13

alexfatt
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Anyone who can explain the meaning of "Desire to have a touch last forever"? I'm sorry, I don't get it but I need it to evaluate the translation into Italian...

1 November 2012 21:13

alexfatt
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3 November 2012 05:24

Lev van Pelt
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"[El] Deseo de tener un contacto que dure para siempre/que perdure (?)"