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Tercüme - Fransızca-İngilizce - Gloria tu manques dans l'air

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Gloria tu manques dans l'air
Metin
Öneri Herpoelaert
Kaynak dil: Fransızca Çeviri Sturel

Gloria, dans l'air, tu me manques,
tu manques à une main qui travaille lentement,
tu manques à cette bouche qui ne touche plus à la nourriture,
et toujours cette histoire, qu'elle, je l'appelle Gloria.
Gloria sur tes flancs le matin naît le soleil,
il entre de la haine et sort de l'amour du nom Gloria.

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Glory
Tercüme
İngilizce

Çeviri Tantine
Hedef dil: İngilizce

Glory, you are absent in the air,
The hand that slowly worked is spare,
My lips, which yours no longer meet,
All nourishment refuse to eat,
And always, there is this story,
In which I ever call you Glory
The sun arises on your sides,
Hate penetrates, then love presides,
In the name of Glory
Çeviriyle ilgili açıklamalar
In order to rime well, I translated Gloria itself into English.
En son kafetzou tarafından onaylandı - 15 Haziran 2007 08:08





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14 Haziran 2007 16:31

kafetzou
Mesaj Sayısı: 7963
This is amazing, Tantine - I can't believe you made it rhyme!

Can you think of an alternative phrase to "I now give a miss"? I'm not sure that would be understood.

How about, "A mouth which yours no longer greets,
thinks of you and no longer eats"? It's not great; can you work with it?

14 Haziran 2007 17:40

Tantine
Mesaj Sayısı: 2747
Hi Kafetzou,

I love translating poetry and getting it to rhyme!

This turn of phrase didn't please me too much either, even though it rhymed well. Its a little too "precious" for the general tone.

How about:

My lips, which yours no longer meet,
All nourrishment refuse to eat

If not, your own suggestion is a good itself itself and would suit me fine.

Bises
Tantine

15 Haziran 2007 08:07

kafetzou
Mesaj Sayısı: 7963
Oh yes - this is much better! I'll edit it and accept it.