Texte d'origine - Français - Les jours passent mais ça ne compte pas j’ai tant...

Here goes a bridge for evaluation :

Days pass but it’s not important it’s so hard to live
Live from this perfume so much different of yours, worse
I counted each minute which keeps me to him
As if I was my own prisoner
It will be soon one years since he saved me, from you
I often wonder where I would be for you
I often wonder what you are doing, where you are, who you love


Do you agree with my bridge?


CC: Botica Francky5591

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CC: FIGEN KIRCI

Merci Miss!
Tantine? Peux-tu jeter un oeil sur le bridge de Miss? Merci!



CC: Tantine

Salut la Miss Salut Francky

Désolée de vous avoir fait attendre, mais le mauvais temps ne m'a pas permis de me connecter correctement pendant plusieurs jours

J'apporte quelques suggestions pour peaufiner l'excellent bridge de la Miss.

[note]Days pass, but that's not important, I'm having a hard time living
Living with this perfume so different [b]from yours, worse
I counted each minute which keeps me his
As if I was my own prisoner
It will be soon one year since he saved me, from you
I often wonder what I still feel for you
I often wonder what you are doing, where you are, who you love

Bises
Tantine