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Translation - Danish-English - tidens børn er født med en mus og computer i...Current status Translation
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Category Thoughts - Kids and teens This translation request is "Meaning only". | tidens børn er født med en mus og computer i... | | Source language: Danish
tidens børn er født med en mus og computer i hånden, de opf'rer sig ikke som børn mere, men de er endnu ikke teenager. børnene er 8 og 12 år, enten man er 5 eller 70 år er ungdommen og dens stil blevet et eftertragtet mål. børn er blevet interessant for reklamebranchen, her hjemme har man lavet et stort projekt på en skole, hvor de undersøger, hvordan forbrug og medie spilller sammen. |
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Rejected translation | | TranslationEnglish Translated by Porfyhr | Target language: English
The children of today are born with a mouse and a computer in their hand, they do not behave like children any more, but they are not yet teenagers. The children are 8 and 12 years of age, either you are 5 or 70 years old the youth and its style has become a coveted goal. Children are objects for advertising agencies, here at home they have created an immense project at a school, where they investigate, how consumption and media are connected. | Remarks about the translation | The Danish settings are suboptimal. |
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Latest messages | | | | | 27 September 2007 06:18 | | | Hi Porfyhr,
I'd like to change the following:
either --> whether
the youth and its style --> youth and its style
objects --> targets
at a school --> at one school
investigate, how --> investigate how
before I put it to a vote, okay? | | | 29 September 2007 05:12 | | | This sentence doesn't make sense:
"The children are 8 and 12 years of age, either you are 5 or 70 years old the youth and its style has become a coveted goal." | | | 1 October 2007 03:03 | | | Porfyhr, please respond to my comment above. CC: Porfyhr | | | 8 October 2007 21:24 | | | Hi Ian
I'm thinking we should reject this one, as we still have not heard from Porfyhr regarding that cryptic sentence in the middle. What do you think? CC: IanMegill2 | | | 8 October 2007 23:52 | | | The best sense I could make out of the text was the following, and it's REALLY disconnected as a text, jumping about like mad from claim to claim:
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The children of today are born with a mouse and a computer in their hands; they do not behave like children any more. However, they are not yet teenagers, but only between 8 and 12 years of age. Whether you are 5 or 70 years old, youth and its style has become a coveted goal. Children are targets for advertising agencies. Here at home they have created an immense project at one school, where they investigate how consumption and media are connected.
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I guess this translation has been sitting around for quite a while, and we have to reject it. If Porfyhr wants to, he could quickly do the translation again anyway, copying and pasting from my above version if he finds it helpful...?
CC: Porfyhr | | | 9 October 2007 06:02 | | | Porfyhr hasn't been on the site since September 28th. |
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