Doručené - p.s.

merhaba benim dilim almanca fakat illakıde ınglızce konuşmak ve öğrenmek ıstıyorum, bana yardımcı olmanız mümkün olabılırmı??

Hi p.s.

You said (in the poll) that this translation could be improved. Could you let us know how it could be improved please? What is your suggestion?
Thanks!

Hi p.s.

You said in your vote that this translation (click on the link) could be improved but you didn't tell us how. Could you let us know what you think please? Thank you!