Hi Coldbreeze16
I can only evaluate texts that have been translated on the appropriate translation page, and not a suggestion, submitted as a message under the original text.
Also, as a native British English Expert, I consider that your translation is not correct, since it contains two gramatical mistakes.
Bamsa, not being an English Expert, simply indicated that you have seized the meaning in Danish, and not that your translation was good enough to be validated.
Bises
Tantine