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Título	Teu grito despertou os deuses
Texto Enviado por casper tavernello	Idioma de origem: Português brasileiro Teu grito despertou os deuses EntÃ£o a manhÃ£ entorpeceu E o puro se tornou voraz E o corvo se fez terno E a MÃ£e Terra nos deu Seu presente mais sincero Mares de luzes sobre as Ã¡rvores Viagem em navio sobre os mares Teu grito espreitou no leste E caiu a noite no oeste* E a horda dispersou E os ermitÃµes voltaram E nunca mais se ouviu um pranto de desespero Montes verdes no horizonte Passeio suave sobre os montes Agora em tua cruzada mais longa NÃ£o mandas mais notÃcias Mas venceste os demÃ´nios da terra e os anjos do cÃ©u FÃ´ra dormir Ã luz do dia, para acordar entre o vinho e o mel Teu grito calou-se no tempo EntÃ£o nÃ£o se sentiu mais frio E o calor nos abandonou E os mares tambÃ©m calaram Mas ainda se erguem as frontes dos mensageiros Estradas longas e virgens Vertigens ao longo da estrada Agora em tua cruzada mais longa NÃ£o mandas mais notÃcias Pois venceste os demÃ´nios da terra e os anjos do cÃ©u E fÃ´ra dormir Ã luz dia, para acordar entre o vinho e o mel
Notas sobre a tradução	Um poema a um amigo que morreu. *a noite caiu no oeste

Título	Your scream woke the gods up
Tradução Inglês Traduzido por casper tavernello	Idioma alvo: Inglês Your scream woke the gods up Then, the morning dazed And the pure became edacious And the raven was made gentle And mother earth gave us her most sincere present Seas of light upon the trees Ship trip upon the seas Your scream surrounded on the east And the night fell on the west And the horde dissipated And the hermit moved back And there was never heard a cry of sorrow again Green mountains on the horizon Gentle rambling across the mountains Now, you, on your longer journey Donâ€™t send news anymore But you defeated the demons of the earth and the angels of the skies Went to sleep in the day light, to wake up amid the wine and the honey Your scream silenced on the Time Then,the cold was never felt again And the heat left us And the seas also became silent But the brows of the messengers are still up Long and virgin roads Vertigo around the road Now, you, on your longer journey Donâ€™t send news anymore For you have defeated the demons of the earth and the angels of the skies Went to sleep in the day light, to wake up amid the wine and the honey
Notas sobre a tradução	A quick translation for helping the japanese one. I put it 'meaning only' because I don't want a fast rejection (in the case of this one is very wrong). This is a very important text for me. It is a poem I made when a very close frie

Último validado ou editado por casper tavernello - 11 Junho 2010 00:24

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	Autor	Mensagem
		2 Agosto 2007 02:51
	kafetzou Número de Mensagens: 7963	Just for you, casper (it's a good thing I saw your note): Some problems/corrections: 1) Is it really a scream? That's quite a negative word. Maybe a cry would be better. 2) What is "edacious"? I've never heard this word. 3) Why is "Her" capitalized? 4) Ship trip = naval voyage? 5) falled the night = the night fell 6) the horde dissipated = the crowd dispersed? 7) was never heard = there was never heard mounts = mountains 9) horizon = the horizon 10) went sleep = went to sleep 11) on the day light = in the daylight 12) for waking up = to wake up 13) among = amid 14) on the Time = ??? 15) coldness = the cold 16) and gone sleep on day light = and went to sleep in the daylight 17 ) among = amid CC: casper tavernello
		2 Agosto 2007 03:22
	casper tavernello Número de Mensagens: 5057	Yes, it is a 'scream'. Mother Earth as a godess, then a 'H'.(hard to explain right now) Edacious He went to sleep during the daylight (the Sphinx myth, middle of a life) I'll check the others carefully, because it's a poem. And I'll not take as a simple magazine text. Thanks a lot for your help, Kafetzou. Do you mean that if I ha not made remarks on the text it was going to be rejected?
		2 Agosto 2007 03:20
	casper tavernello Número de Mensagens: 5057	Why not 'ship trip'? mounts, hahaha Maybe, I was trying to abbreviate. And I wasn't already drunk. I was going to the bar. It was on saturday night.
		2 Agosto 2007 04:46
	kafetzou Número de Mensagens: 7963	gods and goddesses are not capitalized in English - only God is capitalized. Edacious - wow - I never heard that word before. Voracious is a very normal word, though. Yes, I meant that it would have been rejected if I hadn't seen your note - 17 edits is a lot - this took me about 15 minutes!
		2 Agosto 2007 20:06
	casper tavernello Número de Mensagens: 5057	What now?
		3 Agosto 2007 05:26
	kafetzou Número de Mensagens: 7963	Make the edits and I'll accept the translation.
		3 Agosto 2007 12:20
	casper tavernello Número de Mensagens: 5057	Sure.
		22 Dezembro 2007 01:07
	casper tavernello Número de Mensagens: 5057	Most of the corrections was made because of the 'figurative language' and the 'stylistic text', which in poetry should not be considered 'wrong'. In 1959 in his influential paper "On Linguistic Aspects of Translation", the Russian-born linguist and semiotician Roman Jakobson even went as far as to declare that "poetry by definition -was- untranslatable".