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Hi

Could you please tell me if this is ok?

"The grey days are the long silent roads
Of a deserted country and without heaven

At Irene’s house we are singing, we are laughing
There are people coming, there are people going
At Irene’s house, bottles of wine
To Irene’s house we are going tonight

Days without tomorrow and the desire for you
Only these days which seem to be made of stone
Nothing else than a wall
Overtopped by shards of bottles

And then there is you at Irene’s house
And when you see me you run to me
You look into my eyes, you take my hand
And you take me with you in silence

Days without tomorrow and the desire for you
On these grey days I know where to find you
The grey days bring me to you
To Irene’s house, to Irene’s house"



CC: Maybe:-) Efylove

In my opinion it's ok!
But the Italian text should be edited: it's full of mistakes!!

Thanks Efylove! I can evaluate it now.

Yes, Trismegistus also said that there are mistakes in the Italian text.