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| | 21 listopad 2007 20:26 |
| | Then... thanks.
And please, just Lilian, ok? |
| | 21 listopad 2007 20:29 |
| | OK!
My fingers were getting worn typing such a long nickname... |
| | 26 listopad 2007 04:12 |
| | I've made several edits here, and will put it to a vote. |
| | 26 listopad 2007 04:30 |
| | diversi errori di battitura, nel contesto comunque è una buona traduzione |
| | 26 listopad 2007 06:31 |
| | What are the errors, efrank? |
| | 26 listopad 2007 06:32 |
| | Lilian, the warning about name translations concerns the kind of translations we used to get tons of - just names being translated from one language to another - usually requested by Brazilian tattoo artists or their customers. |
| | 26 listopad 2007 08:58 |
| | Visto che vengono chiesti quali sono gli errori, ne riporto alcuni.. mi sembra ci siano più che altro errori relativi ai nomi propri, il resto mi sembra abbastanza ok..
Albanese com Cassano -> Albese con Cassano
Luigi Bacconi ->Bocconi
CdA dell’Ice -> (questo non so.. Ice's CdA? ma non mi convince)
Slovak -> Slovenian
Istriano -> nativo dell'Istria (penisola dell'adriatico appartenente a Slovenia e Croazia) |
| | 26 listopad 2007 08:54 |
| NegoPočet příspěvků: 66 | Liliancanale, here are my thoughts in order of appearence:
Com = con (in line 1)
Commercial university = I do not know how to translate this exactly. But when written like this it implies that the university is not supported by the governent, while what the writer means is that the curriculum on this university consists of commercial subjects. It would suggest a business school but that's not it either.I suggest you leave out the word 'commercial' altogether and just say University Luigi Bacconi.
primary statement = motto
holds the folowing roles= holds the following positions
since 2003 (the word since was omitted here in the translation)
istriano = an inhabitant of the region Istria (?)
lavori pubblicci = public works ( concerning roads, canals, bridges etc. this is not the ministry of labour)
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| | 26 listopad 2007 10:57 |
| | I've made some of the suggested corrections and I think it's OK now.
What do you guys think? |
| | 27 listopad 2007 14:35 |
| | I think there is still something to adjust.. |
| | 27 listopad 2007 14:58 |
| | I made a few more corrections - I added "of Istria" near the end and changed "primary statement" to "motto". There was something else, too, but I can't remember now what it was.
Thank you all for your help - it's been invaluable! |
| | 27 listopad 2007 15:01 |
| | The other correction was about the name Bocconi (3rd line) |
| | 27 listopad 2007 15:04 |
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| | 27 listopad 2007 16:08 |
| | the only thing is "Albanese"... the right word is "Albese" because it is the name of the town/city..
and I'm not sure about "CdA dell'Ice"... "dell' " is not translated.. someone has an answer? |
| | 27 listopad 2007 16:14 |
| | Shamy is right, the correct name of the town is "Albese", not "Albanese".
Sorry for that...lack of attention.
Anyway, I guess it's too late now. |
| | 27 listopad 2007 18:00 |
| XiniPočet příspěvků: 1655 | Yes:
Albese con Cassano (here near to me)
and
cda = consiglio d'amministrazione (I don't know how to translate into English)
cda dell'Ice = consiglio d'amministrazione OF THE Ice |
| | 28 listopad 2007 04:34 |
| | The ice? I don't understand.
I changed the place name to Albese, put in "the Administrative Council of the" and cut out "ice". |
| | 28 listopad 2007 10:15 |
| | Ice, abbreviation of "Istituto nazionale per il Commercio Estero". Anyway, now I think it is all correct |
| | 28 listopad 2007 14:20 |
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| | 28 listopad 2007 14:24 |
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