Translation - Italian-English - Nell’epoca della ridondanza mediatica e della...

Hi xini, just to be sure Tantine gets this request, I'll send it to her inbox just in case she logs in to check her messages. In the meanwhile I'll keep it in standby, OK?

As you wish It's not urgent.

Thanks

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Hi, dear Tantine. I don't understand why you used a comma between "single" and "individual".

Hey guys, I'll personally review this later...I'm working in Lugano right now, until Saturday



ciaociao
and thanks.

Lilian, I took this back, I have to discuss something with Tantine before accepting it.

Thanks

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CC: lilian canale

OK, but just for you to know: all the votes (and plenty) were positive.

This is a very specific text and needs some adjustments Don't worry I'm used to do this with tantine

Hi All

Oana F, I use a comma between single and individual as they are two adjectives. In the English language, a series of adjectives needs to be separated by a comma => a big, brown bus; a small, red-haired child.

Hope this helps Oana

Bises
Tantine

Oh, sure it is like this. I was confused by the italian version. "singolo" is an adjective and "individuo" is a noun. I didn't understand why in English it cannot be the same, single - adj. and "individual" - noun (not that you are wrong, I just don't understand)

Ciao Tantine!
A pair of things:

I would change;

albeit -> moreover

Potentially -> it's the energy that's potential...not an adverb for "concentrated"

tratto distintivo is distinctive feature

Drammaturgia musicale -> very difficult to translate! I had problems with this in the past, too. I have to think about a workaround...like "sviluppo" or something like this...

As Oana says, but that's the first thing I noticed too, , the comma has to be removed, because "individual" here is a noun:
"the specific characteristics of each single individual, claming its right to identity." (The drammaturgia claims the right of each individual!)

Unusual seems like "uncanny, weird", while I'd like to convey the meaning of "never occurred before"...is there a way to do this?


Thanks a lot as usual and pardon me for the long discussions about my texts

Please take care and do not work too much!


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Hello Tantine, how are you now?
I edited the text.

You can now just read it and tell if something is wrong about my corrections.

Thank you!

X.

Ciao Xini

It looks fine to me

Sorry I didn't reply to your earlier message, my connection is really jumpy because of the bad weather (wind, rain, wind, rain, rain rain...) and I am having some difficulties in retrieving my email notifications.

Better late than never

Do you want me to validate it? Or do you want to press the big blue button yourself?

I'm much better I've even managed put on a little bit of weight (still need to add a few kilos though)

Baci
Tantine

Thanks, I've accepted it (10).
So you can eat a lot of pasta
I'll post some new translation requests some day

Ciaociao and grazie ancora!



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