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Translation - Romanian-English - În ceasul dulce al primăverii aş vrea să-ţi spun...

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Title
În ceasul dulce al primăverii aş vrea să-ţi spun...
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Submitted by luisfradique
Source language: Romanian

În ceasul dulce al primăverii aş vrea să-ţi spun că te iubesc, că eşti un soare pentru mine şi să-ţi cer să nu mă părăseşti, fără tine nu am aer, fără tine nu respir... Te doresc prea mult iubite, te iubesc şi te ador.
Remarks about the translation
A minha namorada é romena, e enviou-me esta mensagem, mas não a consigo compreender completamente, e ela pergunta-me constantemente por ela. Agradeço a ajuda.

Title
In the sweet time of spring
Translation
English

Translated by Tzicu-Sem
Target language: English

In the sweet time of spring I would like to tell you that I love you, that you are like a sun to me; I would like to ask you to never leave me. I am breathless without you, I don't breathe without you... I want you too much, my love. I love you and adore you.
Validated by iepurica - 21 February 2009 17:15





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4 February 2009 19:22

lilian canale
Number of messages: 14972
Hi Tzicu, could that "hour of spring " be "springtime"?

4 February 2009 19:51

Tzicu-Sem
Number of messages: 493
Hello Lilly,

The author of the source text inclines to be poetical and if I try and change it into 'springtime' the lyric is a little bit lost. It is not so much about the season of spring ('springtime') as it is about a time/hour when the character wishes to convey his/her love statement.
If the Romanian text had said something like:
"În timpul dulce al primăverii", or
"În anotimpul dulce al primăverii",
then "springtime" would have "fit" the context.
I think I am not wrong if I say that another term for "hour" could be "moment", though "hour" renders a longer period of time, while "moment" renderes a shorter period of time (of course, duh . But because of its poetical feature, that detail might not matter so much. Even if "hour" and "moment" are two different words and the translation would not be so much a "word by word" one, I think the meaning behind it would be well preserved.

I hope I have not turned to be too boring by trying to tell you my idea about it.
Thank you for your patience.

4 February 2009 19:59

lilian canale
Number of messages: 14972
No problem, just an idea, it sounds a bit strange in English, but not wrong. I'll set a poll.

5 February 2009 13:24

iepurica
Number of messages: 2102
I would have said "in this sweet time of spring". Does this sound better, Lilian?

5 February 2009 14:08

lilian canale
Number of messages: 14972
Yes, it would sound better.

CC: iepurica

5 February 2009 19:44

Tzicu-Sem
Number of messages: 493
Thank you Iepurica.
I shall change it.

Tzicu-Sem