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Kichwa	WstrzymujÄ…c pÄ™d ku zatracie ...
Nakala Tafsiri iliombwa na Aneta B.	Lugha ya kimaumbile: Kipolishi WstrzymujÄ…c pÄ™d ku zatracie Jak to bÄ™dzie Panie gdy ma miÅ‚oÅ›Ä‡ siÄ™ trochÄ™ zmieni gdy bÄ™dÄ™ juÅ¼ tylko wspominaÄ‡ dni upojne w geÅ›cie i sÅ‚owie podÅ›wiadome czekanie na esemesy o siÃ³dmej nad ranem i te o drugiej przed snem - krÃ³tkim lecz obowiÄ…zkowym gdy miÅ‚osne obrazy zastygnÄ… juÅ¼ w wierszach a serce zacznie w koÅ„cu sÅ‚uchaÄ‡ i zatrzyma siÄ™ mÃ³j Å›lepy pÄ™d ku zatracie?
Maelezo kwa mfasiri	British English

Kichwa

Holding the rush toward self destruction

Tafsiri

Kiingereza

Ilitafsiriwa na

AleksanderS

Lugha inayolengwa: Kiingereza

Holding the rush toward self destruction

How is this going to be, Lord
when my love changes a bit?
when all I do will be to remember
the ecstatic days in gesture and words?
subconscious waiting for SMSes
at seven in the morning
and those at two before falling into sleep
- a short yet obligatory one
when love images have eventually set in poems?
when my heart finally starts listening
and my blind rush to self destruction is over?

Ilisahihishwa au kuhaririwa mwisho na lilian canale

- 9 Novemba 2009 20:28

Ujumbe wa hivi karibuni

	Mwandishi	Ujumbe
		6 Novemba 2009 23:59
	AleksanderS Idadi ya ujumbe: 17	I mean here "a lack of control over the love and desires..." Well, it seems that "annihilation" is totally wrong. I've not found a satisfactory replacement so far, temporary candidates being: - lose control - lose my mind - lose my senses Let's sleep with this problem, maybe tomorrow we'll solve it.
		7 Novemba 2009 00:13
	Aneta B. Idadi ya ujumbe: 4487	Hehehe I count rather on English expert's help here... I think she will know it better...
		7 Novemba 2009 01:48
	lilian canale Idadi ya ujumbe: 14972	Let's see...if I got your posts right I'd suggest: SMS-es ---> SMSes set in poems ---> crystallized in poems annihilation ---> emotional chaos? What do you say?
		7 Novemba 2009 15:47
	Aneta B. Idadi ya ujumbe: 4487	disarray?? Hm... emotional chaos? Hm... I'm not sure... But I like very much the rest of your suggestions, Lilly.
		7 Novemba 2009 15:56
	Aneta B. Idadi ya ujumbe: 4487	Is this possible that English has no any equivalent for Polish noun "zatrata", "zatracenie siÄ™"?? It means emotional state when people love so much that they become blind, chaotic, difficult to communicate, crazy, sometimes even irresponsible and unpredictable in their today actions... The are totally in love...
		7 Novemba 2009 16:02
	Aneta B. Idadi ya ujumbe: 4487	I found in my dictionary only a verb "zatraciÄ‡" --> lose f.e. He seems to have lost all sens of time... Here I mean that I was near to lose myself... But here we need a noun from the verb... That is why I suggested "losseness" before...but probably it wasn't good one...
		7 Novemba 2009 16:06
	lilian canale Idadi ya ujumbe: 14972	"doom"?
		7 Novemba 2009 16:11
	Aneta B. Idadi ya ujumbe: 4487	You are very close, Lilly, but this is not exactly the word yet... being lost/sink/plunged in[to] love --> ....?
		7 Novemba 2009 16:34
	lilian canale Idadi ya ujumbe: 14972	OMG! self destruction? desperation? Kafetzou? Do you have any ideas? CC: kafetzou
		7 Novemba 2009 16:51
	Aneta B. Idadi ya ujumbe: 4487	O my God! hehe! destruction is the closest word for now... "rush for a destruction..." - it sounds quite good, but it should be more with love connotation...
		7 Novemba 2009 18:07
	kafetzou Idadi ya ujumbe: 7963	infatuation? love sickness? obsession?
		7 Novemba 2009 18:34
	Aneta B. Idadi ya ujumbe: 4487	Thank you Laura! Yes, sth between... Probably English language has no the exact equivalent... The one which I like the most from all the propositions and seems to be the most suitaible is "obsession"... "Rush for an obsession" - is it correct?
		7 Novemba 2009 19:16
	Aneta B. Idadi ya ujumbe: 4487	Oh! "self destruction" is also very good... rush/rushing to self distruction - maybe even better...
		8 Novemba 2009 15:15
	iluvmilka Idadi ya ujumbe: 77	can i just have one suggestion? in Britian we never say SMS but we use a word "text" it means the same thing but is more common and understandable
		8 Novemba 2009 16:49
	Aneta B. Idadi ya ujumbe: 4487	Yes, indeed! When I was staying in England, they didn't use "SMS" at all... They said rather: "I'll send you a text" (or: text message)...only this way... Thank you, Ania!
		8 Novemba 2009 16:55
	Aneta B. Idadi ya ujumbe: 4487	Moreover: There is a lack of the title in the translation.
		8 Novemba 2009 18:30
	AleksanderS Idadi ya ujumbe: 17	IMHO, self-destruction is too "physical". What about "self-confusion"?
		8 Novemba 2009 18:39
	Aneta B. Idadi ya ujumbe: 4487	Hm... I don't know.. Anyway, I like more "self destruction"... It doesn't have to be considered as a "physical destruction" I think, but rather as a sociological state... (-->a human fall)
		8 Novemba 2009 19:41
	cahe Idadi ya ujumbe: 2	Mozna by to przetÅ‚umaczyÄ‡ z innym kontekstem ale ogÃ³lnie jest ok
		8 Novemba 2009 19:46
	Aneta B. Idadi ya ujumbe: 4487	Z jakim kontekstem, cahe? Nie rozumiem Twojej uwagi...

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