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본문 Aneta B.에 의해서 게시됨	원문 언어: 폴란드어 WstrzymujÄ…c pÄ™d ku zatracie Jak to bÄ™dzie Panie gdy ma miÅ‚oÅ›Ä‡ siÄ™ trochÄ™ zmieni gdy bÄ™dÄ™ juÅ¼ tylko wspominaÄ‡ dni upojne w geÅ›cie i sÅ‚owie podÅ›wiadome czekanie na esemesy o siÃ³dmej nad ranem i te o drugiej przed snem - krÃ³tkim lecz obowiÄ…zkowym gdy miÅ‚osne obrazy zastygnÄ… juÅ¼ w wierszach a serce zacznie w koÅ„cu sÅ‚uchaÄ‡ i zatrzyma siÄ™ mÃ³j Å›lepy pÄ™d ku zatracie?
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Holding the rush toward self destruction

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AleksanderS에 의해서 번역되어짐

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Holding the rush toward self destruction

How is this going to be, Lord
when my love changes a bit?
when all I do will be to remember
the ecstatic days in gesture and words?
subconscious waiting for SMSes
at seven in the morning
and those at two before falling into sleep
- a short yet obligatory one
when love images have eventually set in poems?
when my heart finally starts listening
and my blind rush to self destruction is over?

lilian canale

에 의해서 마지막으로 검증 또는 수정되었습니다 - 2009년 11월 9일 20:28

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		2009년 11월 6일 23:59
	AleksanderS 게시물 갯수: 17	I mean here "a lack of control over the love and desires..." Well, it seems that "annihilation" is totally wrong. I've not found a satisfactory replacement so far, temporary candidates being: - lose control - lose my mind - lose my senses Let's sleep with this problem, maybe tomorrow we'll solve it.
		2009년 11월 7일 00:13
	Aneta B. 게시물 갯수: 4487	Hehehe I count rather on English expert's help here... I think she will know it better...
		2009년 11월 7일 01:48
	lilian canale 게시물 갯수: 14972	Let's see...if I got your posts right I'd suggest: SMS-es ---> SMSes set in poems ---> crystallized in poems annihilation ---> emotional chaos? What do you say?
		2009년 11월 7일 15:47
	Aneta B. 게시물 갯수: 4487	disarray?? Hm... emotional chaos? Hm... I'm not sure... But I like very much the rest of your suggestions, Lilly.
		2009년 11월 7일 15:56
	Aneta B. 게시물 갯수: 4487	Is this possible that English has no any equivalent for Polish noun "zatrata", "zatracenie siÄ™"?? It means emotional state when people love so much that they become blind, chaotic, difficult to communicate, crazy, sometimes even irresponsible and unpredictable in their today actions... The are totally in love...
		2009년 11월 7일 16:02
	Aneta B. 게시물 갯수: 4487	I found in my dictionary only a verb "zatraciÄ‡" --> lose f.e. He seems to have lost all sens of time... Here I mean that I was near to lose myself... But here we need a noun from the verb... That is why I suggested "losseness" before...but probably it wasn't good one...
		2009년 11월 7일 16:06
	lilian canale 게시물 갯수: 14972	"doom"?
		2009년 11월 7일 16:11
	Aneta B. 게시물 갯수: 4487	You are very close, Lilly, but this is not exactly the word yet... being lost/sink/plunged in[to] love --> ....?
		2009년 11월 7일 16:34
	lilian canale 게시물 갯수: 14972	OMG! self destruction? desperation? Kafetzou? Do you have any ideas? CC: kafetzou
		2009년 11월 7일 16:51
	Aneta B. 게시물 갯수: 4487	O my God! hehe! destruction is the closest word for now... "rush for a destruction..." - it sounds quite good, but it should be more with love connotation...
		2009년 11월 7일 18:07
	kafetzou 게시물 갯수: 7963	infatuation? love sickness? obsession?
		2009년 11월 7일 18:34
	Aneta B. 게시물 갯수: 4487	Thank you Laura! Yes, sth between... Probably English language has no the exact equivalent... The one which I like the most from all the propositions and seems to be the most suitaible is "obsession"... "Rush for an obsession" - is it correct?
		2009년 11월 7일 19:16
	Aneta B. 게시물 갯수: 4487	Oh! "self destruction" is also very good... rush/rushing to self distruction - maybe even better...
		2009년 11월 8일 15:15
	iluvmilka 게시물 갯수: 77	can i just have one suggestion? in Britian we never say SMS but we use a word "text" it means the same thing but is more common and understandable
		2009년 11월 8일 16:49
	Aneta B. 게시물 갯수: 4487	Yes, indeed! When I was staying in England, they didn't use "SMS" at all... They said rather: "I'll send you a text" (or: text message)...only this way... Thank you, Ania!
		2009년 11월 8일 16:55
	Aneta B. 게시물 갯수: 4487	Moreover: There is a lack of the title in the translation.
		2009년 11월 8일 18:30
	AleksanderS 게시물 갯수: 17	IMHO, self-destruction is too "physical". What about "self-confusion"?
		2009년 11월 8일 18:39
	Aneta B. 게시물 갯수: 4487	Hm... I don't know.. Anyway, I like more "self destruction"... It doesn't have to be considered as a "physical destruction" I think, but rather as a sociological state... (-->a human fall)
		2009년 11월 8일 19:41
	cahe 게시물 갯수: 2	Mozna by to przetÅ‚umaczyÄ‡ z innym kontekstem ale ogÃ³lnie jest ok
		2009년 11월 8일 19:46
	Aneta B. 게시물 갯수: 4487	Z jakim kontekstem, cahe? Nie rozumiem Twojej uwagi...

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