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Hi ekızılok

I saw you have logged in, but you didn't post a reply here (please click on the link and reply there - don't send me a personal message!)

Could you let me know what you think of rollingmaster's suggestions please?

In particular these two lines:

I can not even get her to be mine -> No one filled his shoes yet. (No one loved me except his) is this about a woman or a man?

- I would have given my life to anyone -> I gave my life for everyone (would he have done this or has he done this?)

Thanks!