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Posta in Arrivo - *Serena*Risultati 1 - 2 su circa 2 | | | 13 Dicembre 2006 18:38 | | Hi Serena
This translation is almost right, but there are a few things you need to change: "There was a roomy and copious but disreputable and [bad luck bringing] house in Athen.
Through the silence of the night there was the sound of iron, the noise of chains, at first far-away and then near by.
Soon a ghost appeared: An old man, slender, and [with dirt surrounded[, [gyves] at his legs.
my suggestions: bad luck bringing --> cursed
with dirt surrounded --> surrounded with dirt
gyves --> ??? | | 6 Febbraio 2007 16:35 | | italia 2 germania 0,scherzo bel mondiale |
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