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收件夹 - ekızılok约有1项,以下是第1 - 1项 | | | 2011年 八月 30日 13:46 | | Hi ekızılok
I saw you have logged in, but you didn't post a reply here (please click on the link and reply there - don't send me a personal message!)
Could you let me know what you think of rollingmaster's suggestions please?
In particular these two lines:
I can not even get her to be mine -> No one filled his shoes yet. (No one loved me except his) is this about a woman or a man?
- I would have given my life to anyone -> I gave my life for everyone (would he have done this or has he done this?)
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