翻訳 - Call voice of a company (英語 )

Hi. "cordial service" in the otigianl is "sincere service", but I don't think it sounds well in English; "reach the success" in original is "get in touch with the success" (is it better "meet the succes?". Well, I don't know if my version is the best. Any ideas? Thank you

welcome to ****,i think it is better

what about 致电?

致电means call, telephone (vt)

would it be correct to say "welcome to call center***"? (in all the dictionaries I found "send telegram"

致电　的意思在这里确实是打电话，因为铃音是现代电话拨号过程中的附加功能。

Hi pluiepoco,

If you write your comments in English it will be possible for me to understand them. OK?

Dear Lilian, Pluiepoco is explaining me that the words translated by me into "send telegrams" actaly in contemporary Chinese changed the meaning into "call" (like telephone call), but the text is interupted right there and I don't know what follows, maybe the name of the company. The explanation provided by the requester says that it is "the call voice of a company". That's why I don't know how to translate this "call". Any idea?

Actualy, the requester said (the second message) just to forget about that "call" and write only "welcome to...". If everybody agrees, I can do that

OK, so you edit that way and I'll set a new poll.

Hello, wlcome to call***.Let our cordial service takes hope for you....now the call is reaching successfully

Hi, Nancyya. The requester doesn't want "to call", he prefers without. "Takes hope for you" - I've never heard, anyway in Chinese is written like I translated, an English mother tongue speaker can tell us if it really makes sense the way I translated (for me it does). With the last part I agree, but I'm not sure you can say "the call is reaching successfully". I hope Lilian can help us

You are right Oana F.

Maybe you can just take out that "the" before success.

公司铃音
Company Bell


您好，欢迎致电****，让我的真诚服务，为您拉开希望之门，连接成功
Hello, this is ****. Welcome!
Sincerely hope that our services can give you hopes and offer you chances of sucess.

[my rough translation]

The last part is the problem. Nancy and Pluiepoco have too different versions.

Nancy and Pluiepoco, why don't you like the "door" translation?

i'm not sure for the term"cordial service" as "zhenchengfuwu"

hello,welcome contact ***,let our cordial service open for you of hope and reach success

Hello. Welcome to ****. I hope I would open the door of hope and make you success though my sincere service.

Oana F., your trnaslation is literally OK, except the last phrase "reach success"; in this regard, I prefer to leo's solution "make you success".

It is not "our cordial service" that reach(es) sucess, but "you".

CC: Oana F., Nancyya，leo23849