Tercüme - Brezilya Portekizcesi-Türkçe - Quando a chuva passar.....

Hi Liz,
Could you please tell me if the original text exactly tells these lines:

Why am I talking?
If you don't want to listen
Running away now, will solve nothing

But I am not going to cry
If you want to break apart
Sometimes distances help
and, some day this storm will be calmed/over

I only want to remember you as the time when we walk on the stars,
at the good times that we spent together

We just want to love and love
And today, I am sure that our story is not over
Because some day this storm will be calmed
When the rain lets up
When the weather cleans up
Open the window and look: I am the sun
I am the sky and the sea
And I am yours at last
And, my love is endless

Hi, Cheesecake

What am I talking --> What for talking?(literally), we use this to say something like "Why should I talk?".
Running away now, will solve anything --> Running away doesn't solve anything now.(my mistake)
If you want to break apart --> If you want to leave
I only want to remember you as the time when we walk on the stars --> I just want to remind you of when we used to walk on the stars(Lilian helped here, this is the right translation)

If you don't understand something, ask me

Then I have some little suggestions pls tell me if you agree,

Neden konuşuyorum? -> "Neden konuşayım (ki)?"
Şu an kaçmak hiçbir şeyi çözmeyecek -> "Şu an kaçmak hiçbir şeyi çözmez."

I guess it is "leaving a place" instead of breaking apart, so maybe it is better to say "Eğer terketmek/gitmek istiyorsan" or we should say "Eğer (buradan) ayrılmak istiyorsan" if it is the case.

I agree with your suggestions and you're right, it's "leaving a place (without coming back)" so "EÄŸer terketmek istiyorsan" is good for me.

OK then, I will edit and then accept

Ok, thanks for all, Cheesecake