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Volim te ana

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Kako se pise ljubav
da li kao jedna rijec
ili su to uvijek
barem dvije najmanje

Ljudi se
oduvijek sastaju
vole i jos
uvijek rastaju

Ljubav se ne pise tako
oko za oko, zub za zub
o, ne, ja ne mogu vise
ja sam stigao na rub

Svaka mi rec
strazu dobija
svaki mi most
na drini cuprija

Sta je to sveto nocas
i vjecno zivote sivi
sveto je ono pred cime drhtis
a cemu se divis

Tytuł	I love you, Ana.
Tłumaczenie Angielski Tłumaczone przez gamine	Język docelowy: Angielski How is love written? In one word Or are there always At least two words? People always meet Fall in love and still plit up Love isn't written that way An eye for an eye, a tooth for a tooth Oh, no. I can't stand it anymore I'm on the edge Each of my words is used carefully Each of my bridges is on the Drina What is sacred tonight And eternal, oh, my gray life Blessed, that's what makes you tremble But that you admire
Uwagi na temat tłumaczenia	Luckywise, know I have my expert to help me. Have done my best, but not sure it's enough.

Ostatnio zatwierdzony albo edytowany przez lilian canale

- 5 Kwiecień 2009 00:16

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	Autor	Post
		4 Kwiecień 2009 16:48
	lilian canale Liczba postów: 14972	Hi Lene There are some small things to correct: Still apart ---> Still split up an eye for an eye, a tooth for a tooth Oh non, can't ... ---> Oh, no. I can't... And eternal, (I think it would sound more poetic) oh, my gloomy night is it what makes you tremble ---> that's what makes you tremble The question mark at the end is not needed I guess... What do you think?
		4 Kwiecień 2009 17:03
	gamine Liczba postów: 4611	As I told you, I was sure that I needed your help ans I'll edit according to you suggestions. Thanks Lilian.
		4 Kwiecień 2009 18:44
	itsatrap100 Liczba postów: 279	ma vie grise = more like my dreary/grey life, definitely not "gloomy night", going off the French version anyway.
		5 Kwiecień 2009 00:39
	uaemaria Liczba postów: 1	mislim da izraz 'na drini cuprija' u ovoj pesmi ima preneseno znacenje a ne bukvalno. ne mogu da se setim sada..., puno sam daleko od srbije i mozak mi je stao.ali vidim da se Drina nikako ne uklapa u pesmu.... verujem da neko zna o cemu se radi.molim vas pomozite..hvala