Texte d'origine - Anglais - In fact anyone can be a victim...younger...

The requester wrote:

My attempt is as follows:

Infatti, chiunque puo' essere una vittima...giovani canadesi, compresi le persone, 18 a 29 anni d'eta', sono molto suscettibile ad essere vittimizzati da uno truffo da operatori di mercato di massa, com sono canadesi dalla eta' 30 a 40 anni, rinforzando il fatto che gli anziani non sono sproporzionatatmente puntati dai impostori nel paese.

This is what I wrote...I want to know if what I wrote is understandable!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

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