Prevođenje - Španjolski-Engleski - Siempre me quedará

I do not dare to propose this as a translation, Ian would do a better translation, I'm sure!

"Tous mes projets de vie ont échoué,
maintenant, alors que tout était parfait.
et, d'ailleurs, tu m'as fait tout oublier.

Je me souviendrai de toi comme du plus grand secret.
C'était si bon de te sentir en moi."

Salut Ian! Bonne année 2010! Mes meilleurs voeux de santé, prospérité et de bonheur pour toi et tous ceux que tu aimes!



PS : "you brainwashed me" : "tu m'as lavé le cerveau", ok, mais j'ai fait plus "soft" en français!

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Actually, I had a look to the translation into French that was done from the Spanish version (original text), and it seems the English version (from which I tried to translate) is a bit erroneous, especially the last line.

Lilian, please could you help, so that we can edit and validate both French and English version?



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The first paragraph is part of the lyrics of a song by Bebe **Siempre me Kedara**:


Cómo decir que me partes en 1000
las esquinitas de mis huesos
que han caido los
esquemas de mi vida
ahora que todo era perfecto
y algo más que eso
me sorbiste el seso
y me desciende el peso
de este cuerpecito mío
que se ha convertio en río

I'm sorry to arrive so late in this discussion:
I also wish you a wonderful New Year, Franck!
Now that everything's finished here, I suppose my input comes too late, but:
I do agree, that "brainwashed," with its very negative connotations of purposely manipulating another person's mind for one's own ends, may not be quite the right word (I can't read Spanish) for what seems to be a more neutral expression, meaning something like "you took the place of all my other memories"?
---
The outlines of my life have crumbled,
just when everything was perfect.
And even worse, I can now think only of you.

I keep the memory of you like my best secret,
How good it was to feel you inside.
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?