Translation - Swedish-English - De utbildningar som jag har gÃ¥tt fÃ¶r att bli...

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Title	De utbildningar som jag har gÃ¥tt fÃ¶r att bli...
Text Submitted by emma_andersson39	Source language: Swedish De utbildningar som jag har gÃ¥tt fÃ¶r att bli simlÃ¤rare och pingistrÃ¤nare har innefattat mycket pedagogik och jag har lÃ¤rt mej mycket hur ungdomar fungerar. Jag har genom jobbet i sÃ¤ngbutiken fÃ¥tt butiksvana och blivit vÃ¤ldigt servicemedveten. NÃ¤r jag jobbade i affÃ¤ren gick jag flera sÃ¤ljutbildningar som hÃ¶lls av erfarna sÃ¤ljare. Jag Ã¤r en tÃ¤vlingsmÃ¤nniska och vill alltid gÃ¶ra sÃ¥ bra ifrÃ¥n mej som mÃ¶jligt och jag ser till att lyckas.Som person Ã¤r jag vÃ¤ldigt social och har lÃ¤tt fÃ¶r att lÃ¤ra kÃ¤nna nya mÃ¤nniskor.
Remarks about the translation	Jag ska flytta till Spanien och ska sÃ¶ka jobb dÃ¤r nere, dÃ¤rfÃ¶r vill jag ha mitt personliga brev Ã¶versatt som jag ska anvÃ¤nda nÃ¤r jag sÃ¶ker jobb.

Title

My education in becoming a swimming teacher ...

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xamine

Target language: English

My education in becoming a swimming and ping-pong teacher has included much pedagogics and I have learned very much about how young people behave.
I have, through my job in a bed store, gotten experience in how a shop works and to be very service minded. When I worked in the shop I attended several salesman courses held by experienced salesmen. I am a very competitive person and I always want to perform as good as possible and I always struggle to succeed. As a person, I am very sociable and good at getting to know new people.

Last validated or edited by dramati - 8 March 2008 17:18

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	Author	Message
		7 March 2008 19:24
	lilian canale Number of messages: 14972	"...about how youths act and think." That should read: about how young people act and think. "I've through my job in a bed store received experience..." This line needs some commas: I have, through my job in a bed store, gotten experience... "... to perform as good as possible and I always struggle to succeed. " Here it should be: as well as possible social---> sociable
		8 March 2008 00:00
	lilian canale Number of messages: 14972	A few other suggestions: "My education in becoming a swimming teacher and a ping-pong teacher." I think it would be better: My education to become a swimming and ping-pong instructor (coach)..."... "As a person, I am very sociable and good at learning new people." That should be: .....good at teaching new (young) people. And we still read: "as good as" which should be as I said before: as well as
		8 March 2008 10:13
	xamine Number of messages: 22	To "lilian canale": No, it should not be "good at teaching new (young) people.", that is absolutely NOT what the swedish text said.
		8 March 2008 17:15
	pirulito Number of messages: 1180	Xamine, du gjorde ett bra jobb! Just a suggestion: hur ungdomar fungerar = how young people behave Fungerar (from the Latin verb "fungor", to perform, to work, to hold, to act as, to serve as) dosn't mean "act and think", but only "to act". good at getting to know new people
		8 March 2008 17:17
	xamine Number of messages: 22	Thank you pirulito.