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| | 22 Φεβρουάριος 2011 21:47 |
| | Hi janaina777
Here are a few suggestions for editing your translation:
"When concentrating 1-3 , part of the initial substance remains un-recrystallized, but when concentrating more than 5 , a formation takes pla ce besides the eulytite of crystalline phase with sillenite structure. The temperature is sufficient for the synthesis to be successful. That is why research works on higher temperature materials have not been carried out."
Let me know what you think and once the edits are done I will set a poll.
Bises
Tantine |
| | 22 Φεβρουάριος 2011 21:54 |
| | I agree with the editing. |
| | 22 Φεβρουάριος 2011 21:58 |
| | Can you do the edits? Then I will set a poll.
Bises
Tantine |
| | 24 Φεβρουάριος 2011 10:43 |
| | Done! Thanks for support. |
| | 24 Φεβρουάριος 2011 12:03 |
| | Hi janaina777
I've set a poll.
Bises |
| | 24 Φεβρουάριος 2011 18:05 |
| | At concentrations 1-3, ..., but at concentrations ...., in addition to eulytite the formation of crystalline phase with sillenite structure takes place. |
| | 5 Μάρτιος 2011 11:44 |
| | research works on finding materials of higher temperature |
| | 4 Απρίλιος 2011 19:57 |
| | As this translation is too literary, I propose suggestion for improving translation: When concentrations reach levels 1-3, some part of initial substance does not rest recrystallized, however when concentration reaches level 5 and more...
The initial text is too hard for understanding, if translator is not skilled in chemistry. I admit even Russian people do not catch the idea behind phrase "оиÑходит образование помимо Ñвлитина криÑталличеÑкой фазы...", as it can be understood as specific substance at crystalline phase (1) or that crystalline phase is byproduct (2). |
| | 9 Ιούνιος 2011 08:38 |
| | Первое предложение ÑоÑтавлено не корректно. ЗапÑтые в английÑком текÑте ÑтавÑÑ‚ÑÑ Ð½Ðµ аналогично ÑмыÑловому контекÑту на руÑÑком. СоответÑтвенно они здеÑÑŒ не нужны. ПорÑдок Ñлов не везде Ñоблюден, но ÑмыÑл текÑта понÑÑ‚ÑŒ возможно. |
| | 10 Ιούνιος 2011 10:32 |
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