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Como quien tira de una cuerda que se romperÃ¡,
tirar, tirar, tirar, tirar, tirar...
Como sin darse cuenta rozar un poco mÃ¡s,
los ojos aÃºn cerrados para no afrontar
que el aire es de cristal,
que puede estallar,
que aunque parezca extraÃ±o, te quiero devorar.
Que el aire es de cristal,
que puede estallar,
que aunque parezca extraÃ±o, te quiero devorar

τίτλος	Your silence
Μετάφραση Αγγλικά Μεταφράστηκε από Urunghai	Γλώσσα προορισμού: Αγγλικά Like somebody pulling a string that's going to break, pulling, pulling, pulling, pulling, pulling... Like unconsciously touching it a little bit more, eyes still closed to avoid being confronted with the fact that the air is made of crystal that could burst that even though it looks strange, I want to devour you. That the air is made of crystal that could burst that even though it looks strange, I want to devour you.
Παρατηρήσεις σχετικά με τη μετάφραση	I'm aware that this isn't the best English around, but I'm sure you get the message and could edit it a bit if necessary, Kafetzou!

Τελευταία επικύρωση ή επεξεργασία από kafetzou - 28 Σεπτέμβριος 2007 00:32

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	Συγγραφέας	Μήνυμα
		26 Σεπτέμβριος 2007 14:57
	goncin Αριθμός μηνυμάτων: 3706	I think the verbs on 2nd verse must come on infinitive: "to pull, to pull, to pull, to pull, to pull". Why not "...air is made of crystal"? "que aunque parezca estraÃ±o" -> "that although it looks strange"?
		26 Σεπτέμβριος 2007 15:10
	thathavieira Αριθμός μηνυμάτων: 2247	That even if it looks strange?
		26 Σεπτέμβριος 2007 15:56
	Angelus Αριθμός μηνυμάτων: 1227	even though it looks strange?
		26 Σεπτέμβριος 2007 16:04
	thathavieira Αριθμός μηνυμάτων: 2247	â†‘ Muito melhor Ewok... hehe.
		26 Σεπτέμβριος 2007 17:19
	Urunghai Αριθμός μηνυμάτων: 464	You're right Goncin, those should be infinitives, but it just didn't feel right to translate "tirar" with "to pull" in this context... maybe "pulling... pulling..." is better? Air made of crystal? Actually, why not? I'll edit. @All: oopz, messed up aun with aunque, my bad. Hmmm, what's the best way to translate that concession? :/
		26 Σεπτέμβριος 2007 17:52
	goncin Αριθμός μηνυμάτων: 3706	Urunghai, I'm not sure whether "pulling" (present participle) express the right meaning of the source. In Spanish, "tirar" denotes a tenseless action, that's why it comes in the infinitive and I guess it should be conserved in English. As for "que aunque", please see Angelus' (Ewok's ) solution above.
		27 Σεπτέμβριος 2007 00:20
	kafetzou Αριθμός μηνυμάτων: 7963	"pulling" is also tenseless - it's the present participle . "to pull" would be incorrect here.
		27 Σεπτέμβριος 2007 14:56
	Urunghai Αριθμός μηνυμάτων: 464	Aha, I knew my English intuition wouldn't let me down! ^^
		11 Οκτώβριος 2007 13:01
	irini Αριθμός μηνυμάτων: 849	Questiona (have to do with the Greek translation): a) tirar means "throw" in general if I remember my pathetically little Spanish correctly. Is it an expression or a meaning that I don't remember in this case? The Spanish equivalent of pulling or maybe plucking a string? b)"estallar" has been translated as "a thousand pieces" in Greek. It obviously doesn't have a literal meaning, it just means REALLY broken, broken to tiny pieces. Does it carry such connotations in Spanish? It's a wonderful translation and I want to mark it high but first I have to approve it so any help will be most welcomed
		11 Οκτώβριος 2007 13:37
	guilon Αριθμός μηνυμάτων: 1549	Hi Irini, 1) "tirar" means to throw as well as to pull, "to pull a string" = "tirar de una cuerda",it is the most common word in Spanish for this meaning ("jalar una cuerda" would be the Latin American version) 2) "estallar" does imply bursting into pieces, it comes etimologically from "astellar" (to tear wood into chips)
		11 Οκτώβριος 2007 16:51
	irini Αριθμός μηνυμάτων: 849	Thanks a lot! So do you think that it would be better to edit the translation and put the Greek expression for "pulling/plucking the string" or leave it as it is? (It now says "somebody is throwing the string"
		11 Οκτώβριος 2007 17:11
	guilon Αριθμός μηνυμάτων: 1549	It means "pulling" in this context, without any doubt. I think you should edit.