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| | 3 květen 2008 03:05 |
| | Hi merdogan,
I have two doubts about the English:
1- "demand" in the first line seems to be a bit too heavy. Could it be a lighter verb?
2- "heartily" intensive. What do you mean by that?
really intensive? |
| | 3 květen 2008 10:45 |
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| | 3 květen 2008 13:45 |
| | Hi merdogan
This line sounds a little weird:
"...but I now have an interview with my cousin via camera, .."
What's an "interview via camera"?
Would it be "a video conference", "a video chat"?
"an interview" sounds like a "job interview"
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| | 3 květen 2008 22:01 |
| | Hi lilian
Camera means of couse a web-cam and it is a chat.
what do you say for this?
I really want to open my web-cam but I now using it to chat with my cousin , they are abroad. Where are you now, in Bosnia Herzegovina? I hope you had liked Turkey. My courses are really intensive but they are going very well.
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| | 3 květen 2008 22:42 |
| | OK merdogan so, you can say:
", but right now, I am using it in a chat with my cousins. They are abroad."
(If there is only one cousin the last sentence should read : s/he is abroad) |
| | 4 květen 2008 01:38 |
| | o.k
but not cousins it is only a cousin.His cousin is with his friends. (yurt dışındalar) |
| | 4 květen 2008 01:50 |
| | Well, merdogan, so if there is only one cousin (male), it should be : He is abroad.
"I am using it in a chat with my cousin. He is abroad."
It doesn't matter if that cousin is with friends abroad, since the last sentence refers to one person, the next is understood as referring to the same person, therefore should be sigular.
I hope you understand this point more easily than that "preposition issue". |
| | 4 květen 2008 10:37 |
| | hi lilian
o.k
Isn't "......yurt dışındalar." plural? |
| | 4 květen 2008 11:13 |
| | hi,
Merdogan it's right. İn source text "cousin" word is to singular and " yurt dısındalar = they are abroad" it's to plural.
Can be a politeness addressing. |
| | 6 květen 2008 03:58 |
| | Well, that will be a problem since it sounds really wrong in English.
Perhaps the original is wrong.
At no time that "they" is justified. Nothing was said about them to make it possible understand who "they" are. See what I mean? |
| | 6 květen 2008 19:55 |
| | ".... dışındalar" means that his/her cousin is not alone but he/she is with his/her friends.
".....lar" means plural.
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| | 7 květen 2008 11:52 |
| kfetoPočet příspěvků: 953 | hello merdogan.
in english it would be "you liked turkey"
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