Translation - Turkish-English - Kaç kere kırık hayallerin peşine düştüm ben Kaç...

Hi cheesecake,

Are the two first lines questions? If so you must turn them into interrogative.

defeated ---> lost

Nevertheless (although this adverb doesn't sound well here) I think that line would be better as:
"You may cry if you want, but it won't help"

Also... "apprehend it"? What do you mean?

"I am on fire everytime but I have to go"
That is also weird
Are you sure it's not "all the time/always"?

Hi lilian

The first two lines are rhetoric questions, so should I turn them into interrogative as well?

I guess instead of apprehend I should use "understand", what do you think?

Yes, I should change edit into "I am on fire all the time but I have to go" Is it OK like that or should I edit it a little bit more?

Either you turn them into questions or you change to: "So many times...

Could "gone to a war" be: "started/entered/joined a war"?

I wonder if that line "Love needs a heart, apprehend it." doesn't mean:
"It takes a heart to love"

"Entered a war" is better

The other line is literally "love needs a heart" which means 'in order to love someone and to have a relationship you have to be brave, fearless, passionate' and so on.. So should we use "it takes heart to love" in this case?

In any case, after the sentence we also should use somtehing like "apprehend it/understand it/get it" according to the original text.

"It takes a heart to love" means "A heart is necessary in order to love"

Do you mean that "understand it" is separated from the rest or that's a sentence as a whole?
I mean: "It takes a heart to understand love"?
or "It takes a heart to love, understand that!"

"It takes a heart to love, understand that!" is what I try to mean exactly. So I will edit it accordingly?

It's done lilian Thank you