Translation - Polish-English - Bardzo Å›miesznie jest umieraÄ‡...

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Title	Bardzo Å›miesznie jest umieraÄ‡...
Text Submitted by Aneta B.	Source language: Polish Bardzo Å›miesznie jest umieraÄ‡ Kiedy Å¼yÄ‡ byÅ› chciaÅ‚ NosiÄ‡ miano Olivera Kiedy jesteÅ› Brown Jak zabawnie chcieÄ‡ i nie mÃ³c Lub nie chcieÄ‡ i mÃ³c DziÅ› Romulus - jutro Remus Jutro trup - dziÅ› wÃ³dz ChciaÅ‚byÅ› lecieÄ‡ za widnokrÄ…g Miasto Ci siÄ™ Å›ni Czemu Å¼yÄ‡ chcesz Pinokio W korowodzie zÅ‚ych dni Bardzo Å›miesznie wstawaÄ‡ rano Kiedy spaÄ‡ byÅ› chciaÅ‚ I z twarzyczkÄ… zapÅ‚akanÄ… WychodziÄ‡ na raut Jak zabawnie myÅ›leÄ‡ o czymÅ› Kiedy braknie sÅ‚Ã³w Prosto z peÅ‚ni w sen wyskoczyÄ‡ W rozeÅ›miany nÃ³w ChciaÅ‚byÅ› sÅ‚oÅ„ca musisz moknÄ…Ä‡ MyÅ›lÄ…c w to mi graj Nie umieraj Pinokio Jeszcze jednÄ… noc trwaj
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Title

It is pretty funny to die

Translation

English

Translated by

Aneta B.

Target language: English

It is pretty funny to die
When you want to live
To be called Oliver
while you are Brown

How funny to be willing while you are unable
Or not to be willing while you are able
Today Romulus - tomorrow Remus
Tomorrow cadaver- today commander

You would like to fly over the horizon
You are dreaming of a city
Why do you want to live Pinocchio
In the parade of bad times

Very funny to get up in the morning
When you really need to sleep
And with a little face in tears
Just to go out and party

How funny to think of something
When you have no words
To jump out of the full moon into a dream
straight into the laughing new moon

You need the sun - you get wet
Thinking "it's fine by me"
Do not die Pinocchio
Hold on one more night

Validated by lilian canale

- 28 July 2012 15:22

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		7 July 2012 15:07
	lilian canale จำนวนข้อความ: 14972	Hi Edyta, Could you have a look at this translation and give your input? We won't have many votes for it. CC: Edyta223
		7 July 2012 16:08
	Edyta223 จำนวนข้อความ: 787	Hi Lilian! The translation looks good. I want to change: today cammander - today commander "play it to me" - i'm feelin it Edyta CC: lilian canale
		11 July 2012 21:15
	Aneta B. จำนวนข้อความ: 4487	Hi girls, Yes, "commander" of course! But I'm not sure about "I'm feelin it". "W to mi graj" is a Polish phrasal verb and it probably could be translated into English in more than one way. I translated literally, but it may not be good. My Polish friends who know English very well suggest: "Like it's fine by me" (the most likely) "I'm satisfied" or "It couldn't be better"
		11 July 2012 21:50
	Aneta B. จำนวนข้อความ: 4487	I have read that it depends on a context how we should translate the phrase. If it has a negative sens people can say â€˜ In a pigâ€™s eye/ear I willâ€™ or â€˜I donâ€™t give a diddly-squatâ€ In positive sens we can translate it: â€˜ Groovy, letâ€™s rollâ€™ or "itâ€™s fine by me". SOURCE I think it is negative meaning in the poem.
		12 July 2012 11:11
	Lein จำนวนข้อความ: 3389	disable -> unable, I think
		12 July 2012 21:28
	Aneta B. จำนวนข้อความ: 4487	Oh, thanks Lein. You're probably right. "Disable" seems to be too much associated with "disabled people"...