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Translation - Portuguese brazilian-English - Aquele dia poderia ter sido perfeito. Um dia...

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กลุ่ม Fiction / Story - Arts / Creation / Imagination

Title	Aquele dia poderia ter sido perfeito. Um dia...
Text Submitted by Gabriela Valensa	Source language: Portuguese brazilian Aquele dia poderia ter sido perfeito. Um dia completamente normal. Afinal, ela nÃ£o havia se atrasado. NÃ£o perdera o Ã´nibus. NÃ£o havia tropeÃ§ado. Muito menos quebrara o salto do sapato. Ela poderia ter conseguido o emprego. Tudo poderia ter sido como ela sempre imaginara. Mas isso, se ela nÃ£o fosse Ella. Isso se naquela entrevista nÃ£o lhe fosse feita uma Ãºnica e inquietante pergunta, para a qual nÃ£o houve resposta: Quem Ã© vocÃª?
Remarks about the translation	Ella com dois ls, Ã© o nome da personagem.

Title	That day could have been perfect.
Translation English Translated by alexfatt	Target language: English That day could have been perfect. A perfectly ordinary day. After all she had not been late. She had not missed the bus. She had not tripped. She had not even broken the heel. She could have got the job. Everything could have gone just like she had always imagined. But only if she were not Ella. Only if in that interview she had not been asked only one disturbing question, to which there was no answer: Who are you?
Remarks about the translation	Unfortunately the word pun "ela/Ella" got lost :( She could have got the job (British English) / She could have gotten the job (US English)

Validated by lilian canale

- 20 August 2012 23:24

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		19 August 2012 18:54
	lilian canale จำนวนข้อความ: 14972	Hi Alex, Just a few corrections: Finally ---> After all blundered ---> tripped shoe heel ---> heel got the job ---> gotten the job she had always been imagining ---> she had always imagined
		19 August 2012 19:03
	alexfatt จำนวนข้อความ: 1538	I agree but... what about gotten? Is it an alternative form of the past participle of get? Thanks
		20 August 2012 18:04
	lilian canale จำนวนข้อความ: 14972	Could you make the edits so that I can accept the translation? And... yes, esp. US English uses 'gotten' in this case instead of 'got'. However, I don't say it's wrong, it's just a matter of preference You may change that or not, as you wish.
		20 August 2012 19:38
	alexfatt จำนวนข้อความ: 1538	Sorry, I preferred to wait for you to answer before making the edits. Ok then, I'll put the got/gotten thing in the remarks field if you don't mind! Thanks