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Translation - French-English - Thieery

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Title	Thieery
Text Submitted by tsipora13	Source language: French J'espÃ¨re que ton W.E dans les Vosges s'est trÃ¨s bien passÃ©! Que ta petite voiture bleue a bien tenu pour ce rallye! J'espÃ¨re aussi que cela t'aura changÃ© les idÃ©es et amÃ©liorÃ© ton moral! Le rallye, c'est pro ou amateur? Explique-moi un peu s'il te plaÃ®t! merci! J'espÃ¨re te retrouver vite lundi soir en forme! Je souhaite vraiment que tu aies une excellente santÃ©
Remarks about the translation	anglais britanique

Title	Thieery
Translation English Translated by Grinny	Target language: English I hope that your weekend in the Vosges went very well! That your little blue car held up well in the rally! I also hope it gave you something else to think about and raised your spirits! Is the rally professional or amateur? Tell me a little about it please! thanks! I hope to meet you soon on Monday evening and find you doing well! I really hope you stay in excellent health
Remarks about the translation	I changed the punctuation a bit. However, I'm not sure about the third sentence. Finally, I changed "excellente santÃ©" into "very good health" for it didn't sound to me like an idiom.

Validated by IanMegill2 - 24 September 2007 09:45

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		23 September 2007 13:59
	IanMegill2 จำนวนข้อความ: 1671	Hi Grinny: Some points to fix before this translation can be accepted! WE = weekend a bien tenu = not "hold the road," but "held up," i.e. "lasted," "had no mechanical problems" changÃ© les idÃ©es = gave you something else to think about ("changed your mind" means to change a decision you made before; this means only to change "what you think about every day" ) C'est pro..? = Is the rally a professional one...? Explique-moi... = Tell me about... monday => Monday en forme = "in (good) shape," i.e. feeling good have a very good health => have very good health CC: Grinny
		23 September 2007 20:53
	kafetzou จำนวนข้อความ: 7963	Also: Please take out the spaces before the exclamation points. Instead of "have very good health", you could say "are in very good health" - it sounds more English.
		24 September 2007 09:39
	IanMegill2 จำนวนข้อความ: 1671	Hi Grinny! Here is the second-to-last edited version: I hope that your weekend in the Vosges went well and that your little blue car hold the road well for this rally! I also hope that it gave you something else to think about and raised your spirits! Was the rally a professionnal one or an amateur one? Tell me a little about it please! Thank you! I hope to meet you soon on Monday evening and to find you in good shape. I really hope that you are in very good health. Maybe you can use it to compare the differences!
		24 September 2007 12:52
	Grinny จำนวนข้อความ: 45	It's alright for me, Ian ! Thank you !