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Dịch - Turkish-English - 30 yıl sonraki hayellerim

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30 yıl sonraki hayellerim
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Submitted by ALP_ANK
Source language: Turkish

30 yıl sonraki hayellerim

Ben 45 yaşındayım. İşim doktor. Evliyim. 2 çocuğum var. Biri kız biri oğlan. Kızımın adı songül, oğlumunki Hüseyin. Kızım 11,oğlum 15 yaşındadır. Bu devirde her şey var. Şimdi ışınlanma bile var. Arabalar uçuyor. Ucak yok. Buradan Ankara 5sn.eski arkadaşlarımdan kimse yok. Benim arabam var. Markası el arabası. Ben kansere bile çözüm buldum

Title
My dreams for the next 30 years.
Dịch
English

Translated by sirinler
Target language: English

My dreams for the next 30 years

I am 45 years old. I'm a doctor. I am married with two children. One is a girl and the other one is a boy. My daughter's name is Songül and my son's name is Hüseyin. Songül is 11 and Hüseyin is 15. There is everything in this age. There is even molecular transportation now. The cars are able to fly. There are no planes. It takes 5 second from here to Ankara. None of my old friends are alive. I have a car. It's trademark is wheelbarrow. I have even found a solution to the cancer.
Remarks about the translation
I have changed all future sentences to the present tense..:((
Validated by dramati - 20 Tháng 1 2008 16:42





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19 Tháng 1 2008 16:47

dramati
Tổng số bài gửi: 972
This has been worked on many times. I keep seeing it over and over. I think I will have to ask an administrator why it keeps on showing up.

CC: kafetzou

20 Tháng 1 2008 09:58

cucumis
Tổng số bài gửi: 3785
Each time you reject a translation, a new request for the same language is submitted. You rejected this one twice, and this is the 3rd translation. This often occurs if the source text is not very clear or not very easy to translate.

20 Tháng 1 2008 12:24

smy
Tổng số bài gửi: 2481
You should not have used future tense sirinler, that won't do! and it's three times now I tell this: it's not "IRRADIATION", it's "MOLECULAR TRANSPORTATION"! it's talking about the way of travelling in future, not about "irradiation"

besides, this is not a difficult text to translate , the translators would make better if they had lended an ear to suggestions made so far

anyway, I'll take the admin switch off and you should edit your work sirinler

20 Tháng 1 2008 13:52

sirinler
Tổng số bài gửi: 134
I am sad, because, both Dramati and Smy are angry with me for "Molecular Transportation" and for not doing what they have said.But there is something else they should know.If they write as a message, I do whatever they say.But when they say it under the discussion part of the translation, I may not do it.Because, I don't look at the below of my translations whether there are advices or not all the time.
And this is the first time I have seen a suggestion,"Molecular Transportation" .As you see, when I see it, I have immediately corrected it.

20 Tháng 1 2008 13:57

dramati
Tổng số bài gửi: 972
Don't be sad...I thought that might be the case and sent you a personal message, and I am not angry with you!

20 Tháng 1 2008 15:27

smy
Tổng số bài gửi: 2481
I'm (also) not angry with you sirinler! I was talking about the other two translators and I didn't know you don't always look at the discussions under the translations. I thought everybody first looks into their mailbox (gmail or something else) before logging in here (I work this way and am always kept informed of the discussions under my translations)! Don't worry, now I'll make a few more edits (with your permisson dramati ) and dramati will have a look again

20 Tháng 1 2008 14:22

sirinler
Tổng số bài gửi: 134

20 Tháng 1 2008 14:25

smy
Tổng số bài gửi: 2481
here is the original translation before my edits:

"I am 45 years old and a doctor.I am married with two children.They are a girl and a boy. My daughter's name is Songül and my son's name is Hüseyin. Songül is and Hüseyin is 15 years old. There is everything during this era. There is a Molecular Transportation. The cars are flying. There are no planes. It takes only 5 minutes to go to Ankara from here. There are none of my old friends. I have a car. It is a "wheelbarrow". I have also found a solution to the cancer."