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Title	Fata de zahÄƒr
Text Submitted by salagean andreea	Source language: Romanian Fata Ã®i spuse cÄƒ numai dacÄƒ Ã®i aduce apa vieÅ£ii veÅŸnice se va cÄƒsÄƒtori cu el. Apa veÅŸnicÄƒ izvora dintr-un munte ÅŸi era pÄƒzitÄƒ de un balaur Ã®naripat. Fiul fierarului porni spre acel munte pentru a omorÃ® balaurul ÅŸi a lua apa vie a vieÅ£ii veÅŸnice. Fierarul omorÃ® balaurul ÅŸi luÄƒ apa dupÄƒ care se Ã®ntoarse la fatÄƒ. Fata stropi florile, pÄƒsÄƒrile, fluturii cu apa vie ÅŸi toate se fÄƒcuserÄƒ argint. Fierarul se Ã®ntoarse Ã®n Å£ara lui Ã®mpreunÄƒ cu fata de zahÄƒr dar parinÅ£ii lui nu mai erau. AÅŸa cÄƒ au trÄƒit fericiÅ£i pÃ¢nÄƒ la adÃ¢nci bÄƒtrÃ¢neÅ£i.
Remarks about the translation	britanic

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The girl told him...

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Tzicu-Sem

Target language: English

The girl told him that she would marry him only if he brought her the Water of Eternal Life. The Water of Life sprung from a mountain guarded by a winged dragon.
The blacksmith's son began his journey to that mountain to kill the dragon and take the Water of Eternal Life.
The blacksmith killed the dragon,took the Water, and returned to the girl.
The girl sprinkled with the Water of Life the flowers, the birds, the butterflies, and all turned into silver.
The blacksmith returned to his country with the girl of sugar, but his parents were not alive anymore.
And so, they lived happily ever after.

Validated by lilian canale

- 3 Tháng 2 2009 12:43

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	Tác giả	Bài gửi
		20 Tháng 1 2009 13:13
	iepurica Tổng số bài gửi: 2102	Mie mi se pare a fi temÄƒ, dupÄƒ modul Ã®n care sunt construite frazele ÅŸi folosite timpurile verbelor. AÅŸtept ÅŸi alte opinii, pÃ¢nÄƒ atunci, traducerea rÄƒmÃ¢ne Ã®n stand-by. Voi ce ziceÅ£i? CC: MÃ¥ddie Freya azitrad
		20 Tháng 1 2009 13:33
	MÃ¥ddie Tổng số bài gửi: 1285	ÃŽnclin ÅŸi eu sÄƒ cred cÄƒ este temÄƒ. CC: iepurica
		20 Tháng 1 2009 14:12
	Freya Tổng số bài gửi: 1910	Poate fi temÄƒ, da.
		20 Tháng 1 2009 19:12
	azitrad Tổng số bài gửi: 970	Hmm, eu zic cÄƒ s-ar putea sÄƒ nu fie temÄƒ Este un singur If clause, iar restul e perfect simplu, care e caracteristic pentru basme. Plus cÄƒ solicitanta are in jur de 18 ani, ÅŸi textul e clar un fragment dintr-un basm... or asta nu se face in clasa a XII-a.. CC: Freya MÃ¥ddie iepurica
		20 Tháng 1 2009 19:17
	Freya Tổng số bài gửi: 1910	Bine, poate sÄƒ fie ÅŸi pentru altcineva presupusa "temÄƒ"...Oricum, am vÄƒzut cÄƒ pe aici se traduc foarte multe poezii, citate, versuri de la melodii, lucruri mai artistice. Ceea ce Å£ine de partea aceasta se traduce mai greu de obicei, dar se poate.
		20 Tháng 1 2009 20:56
	iepurica Tổng số bài gửi: 2102	ok, oscot atunci din stand-by.
		17 Tháng 2 2009 21:06
	lilian canale Tổng số bài gửi: 14972	Hi girls, I'd like to know what is going on here. The translation is done and I have to evaluate it. Should I go ahead or is there anyething wrong with the original? CC: iepurica Freya MÃ¥ddie
		31 Tháng 1 2009 20:39
	MÃ¥ddie Tổng số bài gửi: 1285	Hi Lilian, I don't think there's something wrong with the original. We thought that it could be homework, but it was not.
		31 Tháng 1 2009 20:45
	lilian canale Tổng số bài gửi: 14972	Oh, OK, then I'll evaluate it. Tzicu, There's a typo in "joureny" "The blacksmith killed the dragon and took the Water, and returned to the girl." I think there's an extra "and" there. Also is that "the blacksmith" or "the blacksmith's son"? "The girl of sugar"? "but his parents were not there anymore" Tell me what you think.
		1 Tháng 2 2009 11:33
	Tzicu-Sem Tổng số bài gửi: 493	Hello Lilly, Thank you for your suggestions. I have done some changes regarding 'and' and 'there'. Regarding 'the girl of sugar': that's what the text calls her. About the 'blacksmith': the text calls him first 'the blacksmith's son' and then he himself is called 'the blacksmith'. It was confusing for me too, but that is what the text states. Have a wonderful Sunday.
		1 Tháng 2 2009 13:23
	MÃ¥ddie Tổng số bài gửi: 1285	A few small things: a izvorÃ® din...---> to spring from... apa vie a vieÅ£ii veÅŸnice--->vie was not translated parinÅ£ii lui nu mai erauâ€” I think the meaning is that they were not alive anymore.
		1 Tháng 2 2009 13:29
	Tzicu-Sem Tổng số bài gửi: 493	Thank you Maddie. I wonder if 'the [b]Living[b/] Water of Eternal Life' is not a redundant information; that was the reason I said only 'Water of Eternal Life'. Tzicu-Sem
		1 Tháng 2 2009 13:57
	MÃ¥ddie Tổng số bài gửi: 1285	Well, it's your translation and your decision. That's how it goes with tales, , in this case the water was alive too... apart from being eternal. I still think that when it says the parents were not there anymore it means that he returned after a long time and they were gone.
		1 Tháng 2 2009 16:48
	iepurica Tổng số bài gửi: 2102	"fata de zahÄƒr" sugests a girl who was made of sugar (I'm talking about the Romanian text). Our stories are full of these kind of characters, "made" of different materials. And I also agree about the second last row of the English translation. It should be "but his parents were not alive anymore".
		1 Tháng 2 2009 16:53
	Tzicu-Sem Tổng số bài gửi: 493	I have changed into 'were not alive'. I guess the meaning is more likely to be the one you two have sugested. Thank you
		1 Tháng 2 2009 17:26
	MÃ¥ddie Tổng số bài gửi: 1285	You're welcome.