Translation - Turks-Engels - bizi birbirimize daha sıkı bağlayan bu...Current status Translation
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| bizi birbirimize daha sıkı bağlayan bu... | | Source language: Turks
Bizi birbirimize daha sıkı bağlayan bu benzerliklerimiz oldu. |
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| | TranslationEngels Translated by handyy | Target language: Engels
What made us connect with one another more tightly are these similarities between us. |
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Laaste geakkrediteerde redigering deur lilian canale - 7 February 2010 16:45
Last messages | | | | | 5 February 2010 18:22 | | | Hi handyy,
This is a weird statement.
I don't get that "more stringently".
Also, "each other" is not needed here since you use "us"
And "similarities of ours" | | | 6 February 2010 13:00 | | handyyNumber of messages: 2118 | more stringently --> more tightly. (I don't know which one is proper in this case.)
I think we need to use "each other" over there, because it makes a difference in the meaning. I mean, though we use "us", we may mean to direct attention to somebody else. For example, we can say "What made us connect our family/our friends, etc.". But what is especially meant there is "to connect each other".
And about "similarities of ours".. "ours" is used to indicate something that belongs to us. If we say "similarities of ours", here what will "ours" stand for? I really don't get it. :/ | | | 6 February 2010 13:27 | | | As I said before, the line is a bit weird and hard to render.
I think "tightly" would be better.
What about: "What made us connect with one another..."?
And..."these similarities of ours" I suppose that means "the similarities (that exist) between us" Am I right?
If so, perhaps we can say: "these similarities between us" or simply "our similarities".
What do you think? | | | 7 February 2010 11:53 | | handyyNumber of messages: 2118 | "What made us connect with one another more tightly are these similarities between us." is OK, Lily. | | | 7 February 2010 12:01 | | | OK, that sounds fine. Will you edit the translation so that we can set a poll?
You know my Turkish is 0. | | | 7 February 2010 12:56 | | handyyNumber of messages: 2118 | Oh, come on, I bet you know something in Turkish, because you spend a great amount of your time dealing with Turkish translations.
I edited it. Thank you so much for your help! |
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