Translation - Ruski-Svedski - Я незаметно на дереве в листьях Наполняю жизнь...

Hej Pia
Det är inte det att jag inte litar på dig vad gäller ryskan...men jag måste be om en bridge här, för att jag = helt okunnig i språket. Visst skulle vi kunna köra en omröstning, men dom tar sån lång tid

Hi Melissenta, Rainn Saw!
Could you please bridge this one? (engl.)
...some points for your help.

CC: Melissenta RainnSaw

Ja, de tar tid. Och den här är mycket mer motvierad att kolla, den är ju lite svårare!

I am invisible up in the tree leaves
Filling my little life with it’s meaning,
I am weaving my thin thread of silk.
There's great many so close to each other,
One is silkworm and so is another,
All are weaving their own threads of silk


Words from the song Fleur - Silkworm

Big Thanks Mellissenta!!
I'll transfer your points now.

Okay, if I would have translated from this English version I might have written a few things a bit different in a few places in my translation... since to me the english one doesn't really look exactly like the russian original I got, there are a few very small differences!

Pia,
I think that they are similar, except from the first line. But the meaning is still there. I think that I can accept this one, but to be sure...I set it to the poll now.

Yes.... I just think it looks a bit different in Russian: there is no "little" and well, it is not really close... "invisible", I think that could really be discussed and I think that my Swedish translation is also okay (though I would have choosen the word "osynlig" instead of "obemärkt" if I had translated from the english text and not from the russian one). Of course it could be translated into that, if translating very freely?
The structure of the sentence differs too...

Well, I guess I think my translation is closer to the russian original than the translation that I would do from this english (maybe "true" ) original would be... and I was translating from the russian text... So I guess I think there are differences (though small) and that it isn't really fair to judge my translation from this bridge... but I may be wrong, I am not the russian-expert. If you translate from one language to a second to a third some small things could maybe change... (though they shouldn't).

Ja, det gör du nog rätt i...