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Translation - Turkish-English - Tanrı önce Aşkı yarattı, sonra da ihaneti

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Tanrı önce Aşkı yarattı, sonra da ihaneti
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Submitted by laedri
Source language: Turkish

Tanrı önce Aşkı yarattı, sonra da ihaneti...Bir kadın bunları aldı ve üstüne giydi.yalanları doğurdu kirli bacak arasından. Sonra acıyı yarattı Tanrı kundaklayıp bir adamın kapısına bıraktı.Adam acıyı tattı, ihaneti tattı.Şair oldu!!! Eğer böyle bir kadına aşık oluyorsanız zaten,ya şair olursunuz ya da nefes alabilen bir ceset.
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Title
God created Love, then Betrayal
Translation
English

Translated by ekızılok
Target language: English

God created Love first, then Betrayal... A woman took them and put them on. She gave birth to the lies between her dirty legs. Then God created the pain, wrapped it in cloth and left it by the door of a man. The man felt the pain, tasted the betrayal. He became a poet! If you fall in love with such a woman, you will either become a poet or a breathing corpse.
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took them and put them on: she took love and betrayal and put them on as someone would put on his clothes.

The woman in this text, is a bad one. And the man loves her, so he becomes a poem, as a result of his deep feelings. Because of the wickedness of the woman, he is like a corpse, but a breathing one.
Validated by Lein - 9 August 2011 13:12





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23 July 2011 18:27

lilian canale
Number of messages: 14972
ekizilok,

Çevirilerinizi hatalı gönderiyor gibisiniz. Doğru şekilde yapabilmek için yukarıdaki mavi renkli Çevir düğmesini tıklamalı ve çevirinizi açılan sayfaya yazmalısınız.

Bu sayfanın altındaki boş alan ise çeviri veya orijinal metinle ilgili dikkate değer yorumların yazılması içindir.

Saygılarımızla,




CC: ekızılok

26 July 2011 14:52

Lein
Number of messages: 3389
Hi ekızılok

Your text does not sound very natural in English so I have tried to make some edits below. Please let me know if I understood your translation correctly! (As an expert assistant, one of my jobs here is to make sure the English is correct, but I don't understand Turkish, so I need you to make sure the English text is an accurate representation of the Turkish one )

God created Love, then betrayal... A woman took them and wore could you please explain what this means? I don't understand this sentence. She gave birth to her lies. Then, God created the pain and left outside a house of a man after swathing again, I don't understand this sentence left what? after swathing = ??. The man felt the pain, saw the betrayal. He became a poem! If you fall in love with such a woman, you'll be a poem or a breathing corpse. just to make sure: a corpse is a dead body. Is this what you mean?

Please note that these comments are not meant to criticise you; on cucumis, we try to help each other to provide the best translations

26 July 2011 17:05

Mesud2991
Number of messages: 1331
Hi,

Moreover, "she gave birth her lies" > she gave birth to lies between her dirty legs

26 July 2011 18:34

ekızılok
Number of messages: 11
Hi Lein,
I see that you are right. Turkish is my language, I understand that my sentences is not very clear in english. I'll try to explain;

The woman take the love and betrayel from the God, and wear them. So the woman put on the love and the betrayal like she wear a skirt. (it is a literal text)

God creates the pain. He swathes the pain, and leaves it at the door of a house. The house belongs a man.

And yes, I mean a dead body. The woman in this text, is a bad one. And the man loves her, so he becomes a poem, as a result of his deep feelings. Because of the wickedness of the woman, he is like a corpse, but a breathing one.

27 July 2011 13:50

Lein
Number of messages: 3389
Thanks ekızılok, that was very helpful!

I have made some changes and set a poll. Please let me know if you don't agree with anything in the text and I will be happy to change it

27 July 2011 14:04

merdogan
Number of messages: 3769
God created Love, then Betrayal...> God created first Love, then Betrayal
She gave birth to her lies between her dirty legs...>She gave birth to the lies between dirty legs...>
and left it outside the house of a man...>... left it the door of a man

29 July 2011 22:55

Mesud2991
Number of messages: 1331
- "God created Love, then Betrayal..." > God created Love first (adverb, not adjective)

- "She gave birth to her lies between her dirty legs" > She gave birth to the lies between her dirty legs

- "...left it outside the house of a man." > left it the door of a man

- "you'll be a poem or a breathing corpse which is breathing" > You will be either a poem or a corpse which can breathe

- "saw the betrayal" > tasted the betrayal

1 August 2011 19:17

merdogan
Number of messages: 3769
or a breathing corpse which is breathing...> or a corpse which can breathe .

1 August 2011 21:06

angelsrolls
Number of messages: 38
"...left it outside the house of a man." > left it by the door of a man

4 August 2011 01:15

esra palace
Number of messages: 2
l think that this translation almost is good but ıt may be corrected some words

4 August 2011 16:08

Mundoikar
Number of messages: 28
ÅŸair =poet
ilk cümle eksik.
son cümle için seçilen kip yanlış. "or" ile başlayan kısımdaki çeviri de fazladan kelime kullanımı var.

4 August 2011 21:55

Mesud2991
Number of messages: 1331
Merhabalar,

Lütfen öneride bulunurken daha açık olunuz ki oylamaya sunan uzmanın işi kolaylaşsın. Ayrıca oylamaya sunan uzman Türkçe bilmiyor; dolayısıyla yorumlarınızı İnglizce yazmalısın.

CC: Mundoikar esra palace

9 August 2011 12:38

Lein
Number of messages: 3389
Thank you all!
I have made a few minor changes based on some of the suggestions above. Ekızılok, please let me know if you don't agree

9 August 2011 13:09

Mesud2991
Number of messages: 1331
One more thing, Lein.

Poem > Poet

9 August 2011 13:11

Lein
Number of messages: 3389
Aha! Yes, that makes more sense, thanks!