Переклад - Польська-Англійська - Zachwycam siÄ™ TobÄ… Stwórco

I'm under the impression, Ania!!!
I don't know what experts are going to say, but I like it very very much!

p.s. Only the titles in your all translations of my "poetic prayers" I would change.

Stwórca --> Creator God (not: Lord) and this is important difference for me, because all the poems refer to wonderful God who created our world...

BTW. The genaral title of the "Prayers of Admiration/hymns" is "Zachwyty Niewidzialnym" - Admirations for Invisible One (?)...

Yeah, ok, i see what you mean. I should've used Creator, i'll change it in a second
im glad you like it

One tiny thing more:

Shouldn't I meet Thou be "I meet Thee"?

"and I fall silent
when all Thy MIRACLES are singing
and pouring hymns of praise
into my soul
taking my breath away

I meet Thee
In silence
In my bewildered heart
In my AMAZEMENT ..."

I don't understand the last line - convert whom?

Also, the word "bewildered" is a bit negative - it's the way you feel when you're lost. Maybe you meant "wondering".

"bewildered" --> surprised

Convert "them" --> my silence, surprised heart, my amazement...

convert = change into sth good...

and the title:
I marvel at Thee, Creator!
or I admire, Thee/I gush over Thee, Creator!

I used 'laudatory hymns' for reason as it is a phrase used in literature so i thought it'd be more suitable.
Also, im not very good at archaic english, hence the mistakes

'laudatory hymns'? I like it! But the whole volume isn't only the laudatory. After 'laudatory hymns' I will submit my 'thankful hymns' (if I can say in this way), so the whole volume I called in Polish 'Zachwyty Niewidzialnym' -Admirations for Invisible(One), which consists of two parts:'laudatory hymns' and' thankful hymns'...

1) In religious contexts, "hymns of praise" is more common. I never heard "laudatory hymns" before.

2) It doesn't say "my silence" in the English.

3) I guess "Convert them as well" is OK, although I didn't understand it. I can't think of a way to fix it without getting too wordy - "Convert these parts of me as well" doesn't sound so good.

ad 1)Hymns of praise! Yeees! Thank you!
"No one else deserves my praise but You...You deserve all of my praise..." etc. - like in Gospel songs! Super!

ad 2) So how can I say it, because in Polish it is literaly "my silence" (because I keep the silence)

ad 3)I don't know if I understood... You want to replace "Convert them as well" with "Convert these parts of me as well" or not?

1) "my silence" is fine, but that's not what iluvmilka wrote.

2) I can't decide about the last line. Maybe Lilian could give her opinion.

P.S. What is "ad" before each of your numbers?

Hahaha! ad. --> well-known abbreviation of Latin expression "adnotatio" (note) I should have put a full stop after ad...

People often use it when somebody made a list of questions/remarks and they are supposed to make a reference to them like in this case, Laura.

Don't you know it too in America?

"Convert them as well" (iluvmilka) or "Convert these parts of me as well"(kafetzou)

My explanations:

Convert "them" --> my silence, surprised heart, my amazement... change into sth good...

Lilly, could you help us with the last line of the poem, please?

CC: lilian canale

What about:
"Make the good out of them"?

Sorry, that's the only idea that crossed my mind.