Cucumis - 网上免费翻译服务
. .



翻译 - 汉语(简体)-英语 - 简历用语

当前状态翻译
本文可用以下语言: 汉语(简体)英语

讨论区 句子 - 商务 / 工作

标题
简历用语
正文
提交 pengsha1412
源语言: 汉语(简体)

热情、性格活泼开朗的我,心理素质好,乐观向上、为人真诚、坦率,能吃苦耐劳,有较强的适应能力和自学能力,在学习上,我成绩良好,曾获得三等奖学金。在深透课本知识的同时,注重理论与实践的结合工作,利用课余时间进行多种计算机软件的学习和运用,并熟练掌握。在校期间,我一直担任学生骨干,工作责任心强,有较强的组织能力和团队合作精神。我的兴趣广泛,喜欢读书、听广播、体育运动,并曾经在学院组织的运动会上获得良好的成绩。

被拒绝的译文
标题
简历用语
翻译
英语

翻译 Michel Lao
目的语言: 英语

I'm an enthusiastic, optimistic and lively person with good psychological quality. I'm also very sincere and frank with other people. With good suitability and by teaching myself, I got the third prize of school scholarship. I was not only working hard and paying attention to the union of theory and practice at school, but learning how to use some computer softwares in my spare time as well. During school time, I was usually a top student. I have strong work ethic and perfect ability of organization and cooperation. I have many hobbies such as reading books, listening to the radio, doing sports and so on. And I once performed well in the sports meet organized by the academy.
kafetzou拒绝 - 2007年 九月 22日 13:44





最近发帖

作者
帖子

2007年 九月 9日 04:53

kafetzou
文章总计: 7963
This is a very nice translation, Michel, but there are a couple of things that are unclear in English.

1) vivacious = lively?
2) What is "ability of accomodation"? Is it flexibility?
3) Could it be "by teaching myself" instead of just "teaching myself"?
4) The verb tense used sounds a bit strange in English - simple past would be better.
5) What is a "diaphysis"?
6) responsibility of working = work ethic
7) did a good job = ?? (This sounds strange in English)

2007年 九月 21日 13:24

kafetzou
文章总计: 7963
Thank you for making the corrections, Michel.

2007年 十月 4日 08:30

pluiepoco
文章总计: 1263
不认真,并且有不可原谅的语法错误。

2007年 九月 22日 03:55

IanMegill2
文章总计: 1671
The translation is too loose, to the point of leaving some stuff out. It also uses some too-general words/translations for some other stuff that could/should be said much more precisely.