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du er vidunderlig. ikke som de andre. ikke som...
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Originalo kalba: Danų

Du er vidunderlig. ikke som de andre, ikke som én. Du er bare helt din egen, helt speciel. Hvis jeg skulle prøve at sætte beskrevende ord på dig, ville det være. alt? Du er helt perfekt pigebarn. Alle dine hemmeligheder er dybt gemt. Alle vores minder er dybt gemt. Kun i et sted. Dybt inde i mig. I hjertet. Jeg elsker dig!

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Tu es merveilleuse. differente des autres, pas commune
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Kalba, į kurią verčiama: Prancūzų

Tu es merveilleuse. différente des autres,à nulle autre pareille. Tu es tout simplement toi-même, très spéciale.
Si je devais essayer de te décrire avec des mots,
suffiraient-ils?
Tu es la perfection même gamine.Tous tes secrets sont profondément enfouis.Tout comme nos souvenirs. Dans un unique endroit. Au plus profond de moi: dans
mon cœur. Je t'aime !
Validated by Francky5591 - 20 rugpjūtis 2008 17:11





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11 liepa 2008 14:09

gamine
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Bonjour Francky. Cette traduction devrait être rejète; Il est nul!!!!! J'ai l'impression que plus je progresse dans ma langue maternelle, plus mon français devient mauvais. Je voulais être le plus fidèle possible à la version danoise, mais il y a des tournures où, je me rends compte, ce n'est pas possible. Je vais donc essayer de repenser en français comme avant, car si ce n'était pas parfait,
c'était quand même mieux avant. Qu'en penses-tu ?
Je corrige.

11 liepa 2008 17:31

Francky5591
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Il y a des jours l'où on est plus fatigué que d'autres, moins concentré. Voilà, comme disait Alain "cherchez l'épingle"!

11 liepa 2008 19:17

gamine
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Merci pour ta compréhension, mais cela n'excuse pas tout.

24 liepa 2008 06:13

pirulito
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Mmmm... Actually helt speciel (tout spéciale, tout particulière) is untranslated yet.



24 liepa 2008 09:39

Francky5591
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Merci pirulito, j'ai rajouté les mots qui manquaient.

19 rugpjūtis 2008 20:09

Anita_Luciano
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I can see that you have already talked about the part that says "ikke som én" that was originally traslated to "pas comme une" (which is, in fact, what it says in Danish), but unfortunately I´m not able to understand exactly what was said. In any case, I would like to suggest the following translation "[different from the others,] not like anyone" since this must be the meaning with the sentence.

19 rugpjūtis 2008 20:10

Anita_Luciano
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PS: I´m saying this because the translation to Portuguese is based on the French version and not on the Danish so it has not been translated correctly (either).

19 rugpjūtis 2008 20:45

gamine
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Hello Anita. Yes, actually I had written " pas comme une" but Francky told me that one can't say that in French, but "pas commune" means almost the samz thing.

What you suggest is :" Tu n'est pas comme les autres" instead of " differente des autres.
No problem for me but I think Francky should be informed.

CC: Francky5591

19 rugpjūtis 2008 20:52

Anita_Luciano
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ah, no, what I´m suggesting is that you maintain "différente des autres" (this is not the problematic part of the text) and only change the part that says "pas commune" which, as far as I know, means "not common". I´m suggesting that this part (and this part only) should be changed to "not like anyone" - in French, naturally :-)


19 rugpjūtis 2008 21:00

Francky5591
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yes, "pas commune" conveys the meaning. "pas comme une" isn't said in French (I guess the adjective "commune" comes from here anyway)

about "not like..." and "different from" I think it means exactly the same thing, don't you?

and it will avoid redundance <=(maybe some mistake in the orthograph from this word) with the "comme"...except if one's willing it to be redundant.

As you feel, gamine, no problem for me, thanks for this notification!




19 rugpjūtis 2008 21:11

gamine
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Okay ANITA. I'll cc Francky so he can change it; because he was the one who validated it. I remember one thing you told me about translations, and I think about it each time I translate(even if I'm not always good at it) and what you told me was : A good translation is a translation which looks like written by a native and NOT a translation. And I really think this one is a very nice translation, not because of me, but because of Francky. He has helped me a lot, as well as you have done for my Danish and I'm really grateful to you for having and continuing behave that way with me. And I DO think it. Actually, I'm very lucky to have so good experts and it's also a very big part of my reason to be here on cucumis!!

CC: Francky5591

19 rugpjūtis 2008 21:21

gamine
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Anita. What about :"différente des autres, comme personne" . I think it conveys the meaning. Can you change it, please, Francky has logged out.

19 rugpjūtis 2008 21:35

gamine
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Me again . or if you prefer : "comme personne d'autre"!!

19 rugpjūtis 2008 21:44

turkishmiss
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je pense que "d'écrire" n'est pas correctement orthographié, ce doit plutôt être "décrire"

CC: Francky5591

19 rugpjūtis 2008 22:46

Francky5591
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Anita! I found a kind of a compromise!
what about "à nulle autre pareille"?
I know it's a bit long, but that really conveys the meaning (as well as "pas commune"

gamine, merci pour tes louanges, elles me vont droit au cœur. J'aime bien ma langue maternelle, que tu parles très correctement (je ne suis pas capable de parler danois même si je le comprends un tout petit peu!)

Merci pour la correction Miss, j'ai beau porter des lunettes j'étais passé à côté!

Bonne soirée!

CC: turkishmiss

19 rugpjūtis 2008 23:43

gamine
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Coucou; ce n'étais pas des louanges, ce n'était que la stricte vérite. J'ai des défauts, comme tout le monde, mais je dis toujours ce que je pense. VU chef.

CC: Francky5591

19 rugpjūtis 2008 23:53

Anita_Luciano
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yes, it seems to me that "différente des autres, à nulle autre pareille" ("different from the others, not similar to anyone else", right?) could convey the meaning quite well! But I have to admit that I´m basing this on a search on Babelfish because my understanding of French is about zero and a half ;-> Which also means that I have no idea about what you guys are talking about in French in the above comments....

NB: Francky, the Danish text is indeed also redundant.

19 rugpjūtis 2008 23:57

gamine
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Hi Francky. Have a look at Anita's answer, please.

CC: Francky5591

20 rugpjūtis 2008 01:05

Francky5591
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Thanks gamine!

Yes Anita, I saw Danish was redundant and that let me think that maybe it was something volunteerly displaid this way.

"à nulle autre pareille" literaly : "to no one else similar"(same order)


Have a good night ladies, sweet dreams!

see you with pleasure!

20 rugpjūtis 2008 13:33

gamine
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Hi, Francky. Can you correct thos sentence? I can't, because validated. I liked the discussion we all had together, it's interesting.

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