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Tradução - Polonês-Inglês - Szlifowanie

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Título
Szlifowanie
Texto
Enviado por Aneta B.
Idioma de origem: Polonês

Dawna skorupa
dawno opuszczona
Dziś w ostrym słońcu
odbijam promienie
emocjami ...

spalam się - w ogniu - wciąż mięknę -
... Raz srebro - raz złoto ...
Doświadczenie przygodne
... Raz złe – raz dobre ....

diamentowe szlifowanie
brylanciane podziwianie

nie ma piękna bez bólu ...
Notas sobre a tradução
British English

Título
Grinding
Tradução
Inglês

Traduzido por iluvmilka
Idioma alvo: Inglês

Grinding

An old shell
long ago abandoned
Today in the bright Sun
I reflect the rays with
My emotions

Burning, on fire, constantly softening
Turning from silver to gold
A casual experience
Up and down

Diamond grinding
Brilliant wonder

There’s no beauty without pain
Notas sobre a tradução
The second stanza (paragraph) was very difficult to translate so it might be not as clear as it is in polish
Último validado ou editado por lilian canale - 21 Outubro 2009 13:26





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16 Outubro 2009 00:17

Aneta B.
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Beautiful translation! Thank you, dear one!

16 Outubro 2009 10:06

iluvmilka
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You're welcome

16 Outubro 2009 19:26

Aneta B.
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Dawna skorupa
dawno opuszczona

You traslated:
An old crust
long deserted

and you were not sure about it...

Well, it literally means: The old/former crust was left a long time ago...

Maybe experts can help here, Ania...

p.s. Thank yoy for translating also the title. I'm stil forgeting to put the titles into a translation field...

16 Outubro 2009 22:41

iluvmilka
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No, i got the first stanza but i didnt the second one : spalam się - w ogniu - wciąż mięknę -
... Raz srebro - raz złoto ...
Doświadczenie przygodne
... Raz złe – raz dobre ....

I get it but it was very difficult to translate

16 Outubro 2009 22:54

Aneta B.
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I can't underatand your "no", Ania... ?

... Raz srebro - raz złoto ...
Doświadczenie przygodne
... Raz złe – raz dobre ....

Litterally:

...Once (the)silver - once (the)gold [is appearing]
Accidental experience
... once good - once bad [one]


17 Outubro 2009 12:21

iluvmilka
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Aneta, you are absolutelty right but that is a literal translations and i dont think it has any meaning in english

17 Outubro 2009 12:49

Aneta B.
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Yes, I know. This is why we should wait for experts as always...
Take it easy Ania. If you have any other suggestions, don't hesitate to express them here... You probably have noticed I also don't hesitate to discuss... It is needed to improve the translations.
Moreover "Co dwie głowy to nie jedna"

17 Outubro 2009 15:49

lilian canale
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Hi girls

I'll work on this one to help you, but I don't think there will be much to do. It looks fine to me.
Perhaps the beginning could be:
"An old crust (shell?)
long ago abandoned..."

And this part:

"Burning, on fire, constantly softening
Turning from silver into gold..."


17 Outubro 2009 19:30

iluvmilka
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Ok, i've changed "burning, on fire ...". Obviously 'long ago abandonded" sounds right too ... what do you think Aneta? It's up to you

17 Outubro 2009 22:40

Aneta B.
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Yes, of course, it can be shell instaed of crust... I would choose this more pejorative one, but I don't now which it is...hehe

"long ago abandonded"
"burning, of fire..."
- all sound great! Thanks, girls!
I'm so grateful for your work on my "poems"...

17 Outubro 2009 22:36

lilian canale
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OK then, Ania if you make these edits we can set a poll. I think it looks and sounds good.

17 Outubro 2009 23:00

iluvmilka
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Done

17 Outubro 2009 23:09

lilian canale
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To the poll!

17 Outubro 2009 23:13

lilian canale
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Oh, if you want something stronger instead of shell/crust , what about "carcass"?

17 Outubro 2009 23:18

iluvmilka
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I didn't know that word ... well, it is strong but i don't think it has the same meaning. What do you think Aneta? In my dictionary it says that caracas is "padlina, ścierwo albo zwłoki zwierząt". It's not what you meant, is it?

17 Outubro 2009 23:21

lilian canale
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carcass is used figuratively as: something lifeless, empty

17 Outubro 2009 23:33

Aneta B.
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Well, I meant about sth like "shell", "crust", "box" or even "prison"... It was to be a symbol of my depression - state of mind when we are closed in ourselves...

I wrote it just after the state had passed by...

17 Outubro 2009 23:29

lilian canale
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Oh, well, then I guess 'shell' is fine

17 Outubro 2009 23:32

Aneta B.
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Yes, I guess it is the best equivalent of Polish "skorupa"...