Oversættelse - Tyrkisk-Engelsk - Ä°yi ki varsın... Öyle anlatılmaz duygular...

Hi Minny,
You have repeated the same mistakes you made in your former version. Please review your translation.

Hi Lilian Canale,
I am sorry.
After having given it a 2nd look I changed a lot, but seemingly not enough.
You may thus reject it and I hope for more luck next time.
Hopefully, I will be able to trace the translation that will be accepted, so that I can learn from it.

Minny, you are a good translator, but there are some structures in English that are really hard to get. One of them is that "neither-nor"
I will correct your mistakes this time, OK?

"Fortunately, you exist. Feelings such as those I experience once again are inexplicable, even if I am terribly afraid of losing you, this love I feel spreads quickly inside me, outside me, all over my life and I want neither to prevent nor to add to it more pains than those it can bring. I just want to live through you."

What do you think?

Perfect!
I should have detected my error regarding "neither-nor".
I hope that I learned through this translation to stay behind a problem and really solve it, instead of thinking "it does not make sense, etc."
Well, thank you so much indeed for helping/teaching me.;-)
You are doing a splendid job at cucumis!

ok, nombre de douleurs can be translated as number of pains.