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So many times I have chased the broken dreams

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cheesecake

Cieľový jazyk: Anglicky

So many times I have chased the broken dreams
So many times I have entered a war, which is already lost
Don't be afraid, it won't take long
This is love, it doesn't kill
No one hears.
You may cry if you want, but it won't help
It takes a heart to love, understand that!
I am on fire all the time but I have to go
I can't dress your wound and relieve your pain
Look at me, I am already the pain itself

Nakoniec potvrdené alebo vydané lilian canale

- 19 mája 2009 21:54

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	Autor	Príspevok
		18 mája 2009 13:42
	lilian canale Počet príspevkov: 14972	Hi cheesecake, Are the two first lines questions? If so you must turn them into interrogative. defeated ---> lost Nevertheless (although this adverb doesn't sound well here) I think that line would be better as: "You may cry if you want, but it won't help" Also... "apprehend it"? What do you mean? "I am on fire everytime but I have to go" That is also weird Are you sure it's not "all the time/always"?
		18 mája 2009 19:04
	cheesecake Počet príspevkov: 980	Hi lilian The first two lines are rhetoric questions, so should I turn them into interrogative as well? I guess instead of apprehend I should use "understand", what do you think? Yes, I should change edit into "I am on fire all the time but I have to go" Is it OK like that or should I edit it a little bit more?
		18 mája 2009 19:31
	lilian canale Počet príspevkov: 14972	Either you turn them into questions or you change to: "So many times... Could "gone to a war" be: "started/entered/joined a war"? I wonder if that line "Love needs a heart, apprehend it." doesn't mean: "It takes a heart to love"
		18 mája 2009 19:50
	cheesecake Počet príspevkov: 980	"Entered a war" is better The other line is literally "love needs a heart" which means 'in order to love someone and to have a relationship you have to be brave, fearless, passionate' and so on.. So should we use "it takes heart to love" in this case? In any case, after the sentence we also should use somtehing like "apprehend it/understand it/get it" according to the original text.
		18 mája 2009 19:56
	lilian canale Počet príspevkov: 14972	"It takes a heart to love" means "A heart is necessary in order to love" Do you mean that "understand it" is separated from the rest or that's a sentence as a whole? I mean: "It takes a heart to understand love"? or "It takes a heart to love, understand that!"
		18 mája 2009 20:05
	cheesecake Počet príspevkov: 980	"It takes a heart to love, understand that!" is what I try to mean exactly. So I will edit it accordingly?
		18 mája 2009 20:14
	cheesecake Počet príspevkov: 980	It's done lilian Thank you