Traducción - Turco-Inglés

	Autor	Mensaje
		27 Junio 2008 00:31
	lilian canale Cantidad de envíos: 14972	Ouch handyy! This one will be tough! Let's start with this part: "As long as I tell, winter strikes my lines As long as I tell, my heart both feels cold and gets warm, too." Put that in different words to see if I get it.
		29 Junio 2008 22:58
	handyy Cantidad de envíos: 2118	I knew that it was gonna be tough.. -- (actually, first sentence is figurative.) anyway, here "strike" means -for light, a shadow, rain, etc.- "to fall on". (for example: A bright light struck her face.) -- as for the second sentence; During the time that I tell/narrate, my hearth feels cold, and at the same time it gets warm.
		29 Junio 2008 23:10
	lilian canale Cantidad de envíos: 14972	That's what I thought. It doesn't make sense because you used "as long as" instead of "while" or "as". What you mean is that " things happen at the same time" "As I speak, the winter strikes my lines As I speak, my heart feels cold and also gets warm" What do you think?
		29 Junio 2008 23:13
	handyy Cantidad de envíos: 2118	done!
		30 Junio 2008 01:27
	lilian canale Cantidad de envíos: 14972	OK, but that was just the beginning Let's go on to the 3rd and 4th lines... "My geraniums also didn't blossom today Perhaps, they're offended by colours " That "also" in the negative sentence does not sound well, it should be "either". But the syntax should change to: "Today, my geraniums didn't blossom either Perhaps they are ('ve gotten/feel) offended by the colours"
		29 Junio 2008 23:55
	handyy Cantidad de envíos: 2118	Ooooops! (will we go through all lines? ) ok, I'll edit it, too.
		30 Junio 2008 00:15
	lilian canale Cantidad de envíos: 14972	Come on! It's not that hard! "On my hands are what I couldn't live as if they were sins In other words, I'm fading without you I'm dying bluely and bluely " What is there in your hands? Those things you couldn't experience? In that case it could be: "In my hands, as sins, are the things I couldn't live". That "bluely and bluely" I think should be "bluer and bluer" or just one "bluely".
		30 Junio 2008 00:26
	handyy Cantidad de envíos: 2118	In my hands, as sins, are what I couldn't live. can I say it like that? (btw, Ä± am hopeful about the rest lines. should I ?? )
		30 Junio 2008 00:55
	lilian canale Cantidad de envíos: 14972	"the experiences I couldn't have" would sound better. Is that the meaning?
		30 Junio 2008 01:14
	handyy Cantidad de envíos: 2118	That is REALLY better! thankss
		30 Junio 2008 01:24
	lilian canale Cantidad de envíos: 14972	Ok, now...finally: "Can you hear (me)? Are you there? Do you exist or not? Don't forget(remember?) just one thing: Burning, breaking down, and crying, all the time you come back to my mind." (Who's burning, etc....? I? you?)
		30 Junio 2008 01:33
	handyy Cantidad de envíos: 2118	(finally!) -- Burning, (...) I loved you!
		30 Junio 2008 01:47
	lilian canale Cantidad de envíos: 14972	So, if it's I'm burning...I think it would be better: "I burn, break down and cry every time you come back to my mind. I loved you" Or did I misunderstood the meaning?
		30 Junio 2008 03:31
	handyy Cantidad de envíos: 2118	maybe, "with burning, etc, I loved you". Is it weird?
		30 Junio 2008 03:40
	lilian canale Cantidad de envíos: 14972	handyy, the way it is, what is undestood is that the other person, the "addressee" is the one burning, breaking down, crying. "Don't forget just one thing: Burning, breaking down, and crying at all the time you come back to my mind" See what I mean? "you" is the only subject there.
		30 Junio 2008 03:50
	handyy Cantidad de envíos: 2118	what about using an exclamation mark after "Don't forget just one thing", and, if necessary, writing "I love you" right after "...come back to my mind"?? ------ Don't forget just one thing! Burning, breaking down, and crying at all the time you come back to my mind, I loved you!
		30 Junio 2008 04:02
	lilian canale Cantidad de envíos: 14972	Oh, now we are speaking the same language! Punctuation works miracles! Here is the final version: As I speak, the winter strikes my lines As I speak, my heart feels cold, but at the same time, it gets warm. Today my geraniums didn't blossom either. Perhaps, they're offended by the colours. In my hands, as sins, are the experiences I couldn't have. In other words, I'm fading without you. I'm dying bluely. Can you hear me? Are you there? Do you exist or not? Don't forget just one thing: Burning, breaking down, and crying every time you come back to my mind, I loved you! Is that right?
		30 Junio 2008 04:03
	handyy Cantidad de envíos: 2118	yeeeeppp, exactly
		30 Junio 2008 04:06
	lilian canale Cantidad de envíos: 14972	Great! Congrats for us! Let's see if the poll doesn't bring any trouble hahahaha Good work
		30 Junio 2008 04:11
	handyy Cantidad de envíos: 2118	Congrats for you - and a little for me sorry, as I made you tired and thanks a lot for your patience and help

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